hmm... that's new and interesting, I like it, you have an interesting writing style and amazing plots, I love it
keep it up
-megz-

wounderful and very cute I think I'll try and read some of your other storys too

Nice idea! Pretty neat that the Sorting Hat would know there futures and would be going along with or against Dumbledores orders... Good work!

'Lily Evans

So five people had been sorted already, two in Gryffindor. One of each in the rest… If I think about the odds now it looks like I will not be going into Gryffindor… Because then Gryffindor would have three… and that wouldn’t be right… Oh she called out my name… it’s my turn!

Ahh… Someone new.

Yes, I’m new.

But no stupid family backgrounds, no blood I have to consider.

My family is all muggles.

But you are tricky to figure out.

Sorry.

Not your fault m’dear, let’s see… Heaps of brains, very good… Loyal… also good… Brave… a little… Sly? Cunning? Not as much as others… Hufflepuff would suit you, if it wasn’t for the brains…

No it wouldn’t.

You think you wouldn’t fit in Hufflepuff?

I could never be a Hufflepuff! Don’t you dare put me in there!

A temper, a temper, your future is bright and I know where I must put you… Dumbledore would never forgive me if I didn’t put you here, it would ruin the whole wizarding future… He’s been talking about you for ages, young lady.

What?

But I’m not sure if it’s right… That house would not suit you! And I know a young Gryffindor that’s coming up that would love for you to be in his house…And your son will be here… so you better go to…

GRYFFINDOR!' such like the real conversations!
this was good.
keep writing!

Very interesting. I see how it fit with your other story. Good work
Bando2

Very funny and very good. I'm about to start reading A Year of Secrets, Lies, and Betrayal. Can't wait. Great Job. Keep up the great work!

I liked it =) quite funny

One minor detail, I doubt that an 11 year old boy would be worrying about getting his soulmate (do girls still have cooties at that age?)... and an 11 year old girl, well, she might be daydreaming about it.

In any case, the story just makes them sound quite older than 11 year olds, but whatever, it's still funny!

Yes, I like this one, it is more happy, and Lily and James do not fight!!!!! No one dies, you should write more story pre your other story!!

You named your character after me!

That was so cool...



You are such a sweet girl Kaci!

Oh good chapter by the way...very nice...and interesting too...

I love Remus so much...I can't wait to see more of Katie's and Remus' backgrounds

ya lots

Old Mrs. PJ

You named your character after me!

That was so cool...



You are such a sweet girl Kaci!

Oh good chapter by the way...very nice...and interesting too...

I love Remus so much...I can't wait to see more of Katie's and Remus' backgrounds

ya lots

Old Mrs. PJ

that was really good i'm surprised sirius wasn't thinking about food

funny i loved it now please and more chapters to the other one

great chapter! keep it up. i've read your other fanfic and i think its fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've never read your other piece, but this one thoroughly intrigued me!

Though you probably didn't intend it as such, this really made me curious to read your longer work. I love when people post one-shots that are spin-offs, gives others a chance to look at their writing without committing.

Anyways, I like how you cycled viewpoints, though thought that that Sorting Hat was a little too talkative, especially with James and Lily. Though, it was amusing.

Oh, I did enjoy that terribly, Kaci! Well done!! It was really good!

Your beta,
x Kirstie x