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Totally LOVING this!! you're absolutely amazing. =) im all happy happy happy. |
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Cute story! I loved Hermione's description of Ron's kisses as 'mouth-rape'. That really shouldn't be funny, but it was ;D
And describing Hermione as a sock-finding fiend? Priceless.
Tattoos, ah, the great teenage rebellion. Yay!
A lightning bolt on her hip? Hmm. He could have fun with that... *ventures off into the gutter* |
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Hey
This was a short sweet story. I really enjoyed it and it was funny when you used all the stimulus things lol. I read them at the start and was like - omg how is she going to incorporaate that? lol
Good Job!
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ginger25Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/08/06
Oh that was so cute. I love the way you write Harry and Hermione's relationship, it is so sweet and endearing. I hope you will consider writing longer fics in the future! |
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ginger25Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/08/06
Oh that was the cutest thing, Harry and Hermione are so sweet. Why can't JKR see things the way you do? Hehe. |
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Hee! Harry's inner monologue sounds just like Hermione! "Yes, that’s exactly what she would have said…honestly." I love that. Hermione shoud be the voice in Harry's head. Also nice that we have slightly more relaxed (but not THAT relaxed) Hermione who can take a break for important things like snogs. Rather proud of Harry taking it in his head to just SAY something. Also like how you neatly did away with the sixth books seemingly unavoidable issues- if only JKR would do the same *sulk*. Like the break up with Ginny.
And the snogging. Did I mention I liked the snogging? Brava! |
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this was a good story, and no i didnt expect the snogging in the library but enjoyed it none the less. |
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I loved this fic! Three chapters though. Could you maybe think of expanding on the story a little? Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with loads of sugar substitute on top! |
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Nice. Very nice. You're right, it has no plot, but I love it, all the same. It's really funny, the way you worked in all of the stuff from the challenge. And I loved the idea of the tattoos. Never stop writing! |
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You know, I love how you portray the relationship between Harry and Hermione, that easy, comfortable friendship that they've had for several books now. It just seems so natural when it progresses into romance that I wonder at what JKR is thinking. Lovely job, really. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/01/06
*squeals* i soooooo wish that this could be able to happen in the next Harry Potter book, you're really good at writing like what could happen and stuff. |
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clancy21Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/01/06
Another very good story. I always enjoy your writing and look forward to the continuation of your work in process stories, and your news story.
Keep up the good work.
PS any updates on Kissing Lessons?
thanks,
Val
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ok wow I liked the ending, I t was sweet and so harry to try to get out of studying. i loved the story, but wish that Harry would have made a bigger thing about Hermoine putting the tatoo on her hip. I will be going to Kissing Lessons next, it sounds interesting and you mentioned that you would be finishing it soon in the authors note at the end. So on to the next story. |
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ok I really really like this one. I Really want ot know where Hermoine put the tatto of the lightning bolt.I liked that Harry had Hermoine "marked" as his. I thing that is funny that you brought in the joke of Harry having a hippogriff tatooed on his chest and the thing about the horntail. OK off I go to the next chapter, lets see if hermoine will tell or show Harry his claim on her. |
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ok yay!! This story has more than one chapter so that is a plus.I hope that the next chapters are as good as this one. And I found no spelling eroors but then again I was kinda busy reading too fast to look and make sure every word was correct. OK and that thing about Vernon and viagra that is just gross!!! I swear I almost gagged reading it!!! I can't immagine how you must have felt wroting it. So now I go to the next chapter and I hope that it is as good as this one was. |
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