the first chapter was so funny!! cant wait for more to come! woot for that

I didn't think that it was you, actually. But anyhoo, more chapters would be nice!

New idea for a story! I really, really like this! Very original, too.

this fic is funny
you should write more to it
are you sure that it isn't you?
i think that harry should be able to read the books once voldemort is dead so that he can kill JKR for invading his private life and publicising it without his permision
funny!

What the heck is up with the person who copied the story? God, people. Write a review to earn portkey points, not copy a story! Anyways, nice job, hilarious story!
XD, Emma

So, is the first person character in this story you? That's pretty cool if it is. Anyway, nice story so far, I'll have to read the rest later!

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Caity

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

ooh this is such a cool concept how gr8 wud it be if it wer real luv ur story

big luv,

LOL...that was a fun read...i really enjoyed reading this...i feel your pain with the moving part.
Take care and keep it up!!!
Sheryl

OH that was such a wonderful little indulgence. For some reason it had me giggling like a madwoman even though I don't think it was meant to be obviously funny. Anywho, I love the idea and all I have to say is... if only

Back to the future, huh? Good stuff. This little ficlet was kinda cool, original. I think you're one of the few authors who have inserted themselves in a story so far! Good job!

they turned the corner they ran into a little boy who was sprouting the most grotesque appendages from the oddest places they had ever seen.

“What happened?” Hermione asked as she rushed over to the sobbing child.

“It, was, it…was, THEM,” the little boy shrieked and then refused to say another word. they turned the corner they ran into a little boy who was sprouting the most grotesque appendages from the oddest places they had ever seen.

“What happened?” Hermione asked as she rushed over to the sobbing child.

“It, was, it…was, THEM,” the little boy shrieked and then refused to say another word. they turned the corner they ran into a little boy who was sprouting the most grotesque appendages from the oddest places they had ever seen.

“What happened?” Hermione asked as she rushed over to the sobbing child.

“It, was, it…was, THEM,” the little boy shrieked and then refused to say another word. they turned the corner they ran into a little boy who was sprouting the most grotesque appendages from the oddest places they had ever seen.

“What happened?” Hermione asked as she rushed over to the sobbing child.

“It, was, it…was, THEM,” the little boy shrieked and then refused to say another word. they turned the corner they ran into a little boy who was sprouting the most grotesque appendages from the oddest places they had ever seen.

“What happened?” Hermione asked as she rushed over to the sobbing child.

“It, was, it…was, THEM,” the little boy shrieked and then refused to say another word.

i like it - nice start to the story- not bad at all- the plot seems to be developing nicely

I liked it! It was different. I've never read one like that before. It's quite cute. Great job.

-HermyMalfoy
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Ok, that was completely random and amusing.

The constant "snog me senseless" makes me laugh... a lot.