Bizarre but weird - I like it!

Usually I dont like stories where you have the
harry potter books in the storyline or the main
character who is looking a bit mary-sueish, but for this oneI will let it slide.

Looking forward to see where you take it.

oh, ok then...... well, write more ok? i really appreciate your work....

I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!!

cute fiction... at first, i thought it was hermione speaking but when i came across the 'book' so called 'half blood prince' i know it wasn't her...

hmm, i guessing you wish it really happened, eh?

I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!!

Love the story line and will be looking forwards to the next chapter.

THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST THING I HAVE EVER READ... I LOVED IT... WE REALLY NEED TO FIND SOMEONE TO JUMP IN TO HIS UNIVERSE AND SMACK HIS HEAD AROUND A BIT.. LOVED IT REALLY CREATIVE

This is so cute! And hillarious at the same time when she battles with her emotions in her head! So, just to clarify, it is Hermione right? If it isn't, then just reply back to my e-mail and tell me who it is.....

OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD!OH MY GOD! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THE SECOND CHAPTER FOR LIKE FOREVER CAN YOU PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER AND THEN MORE CHPATERS THIS STORY SEEMS TO BE GOING SO WELLL!!!!!

Okay, so it is a pseudo-Mary Sue. However, it is a /good/ Mary Sue. Let's face it, we've all felt this way sometimes, wishing that you could crawl onto the page or jump onto the picture and /demand/ that the characters get their acts together. This is especially the case with characters like Harry who spend a lot of time sulking and not taking positibe action to solve their problems.

A funny little concept story well realised.

??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? HUH i'm sorry ur a god writer and all but its a crappy story plot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story keep it up and make sure you keep adding

Heh, an amusing self-insertion. I can see why you had fun writing it!

This was tremendously fun! And I don't really care if it was a self-insertion or not; the story reads well and that isn't really germane to the plot and dialogue. Very nice work.

who is this girl i thought it was about hermione and harry

haha! that was cool! diving into HP after HBP with the book in hand! it would be so awesome if that could really happen! on to the next chapter i go!

LOL! I like... I wish I was in your position... I like the italics... very funny... lol ! well written!