I love when he can read her mind... we can only hope that Harry can get past superficial teenhood in the books! Lovely all over.

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ooooooooooh that was soooo beautiful. I wish I could write something like that. as it is well.....but I really loved it!!!

Oh my word, that is absolutely adorable and so extremely true! Wonderful story! I love it! Keep up the great work!

the story"Plain is Beautiful" is a very interesting and good chapter.... but it is hard to read using the first person point of view.. it is better if the authors use the third person....

That is absolutely adorable! And I totally agree with Hermione- society places too much value on outer appearnce. If someone just likes you for how you look then he or she doesn't even know you at all...

Very sweet. There's a lot of talk right now about how "insecure" Hermione was in HBP. Well, maybe so. But she was looking for love (and security about her looks) in the wrong places Nicely done.

I love how this story talks about life how it truly is, and how hermione is so comfortable with her outer appearance. It's also great that the not supermodel gets the guy!!

omgosh.. i loved this so much.. how often I feel like plain Jane Granger and ponder as she does in this fan fic.. i just hope i find "my Harry" who'll like me the way I am Very well written.. you have a very nice writing style thats easy to read, flows beautifully and is poetic in a sence

Your fic is right on the head mate. If there is one thing otherthan Harry's destiny that was EMPHASIZED in Bk6 its that BRAINS will always come second to BEAUTY.

Cho had dazzling hair; Ginny has glistening hair; and for being good at Quidditch Ginny is now HARRY'S EQUAL. MY GOODNESS! Why didtn we see that coming? Anvil sized hints she said..

Fortunately this fic pics up what the AUTHOR herself has conveniently ignored. Hauntingly sad but with a twinge of hope in the end. Exactly what the real book didnt let on..pity.

Yes! You've really exposed and laid bare the character of Hermione here, not the stunningly gorgeous one that people always describe her as in fan fics, the REAL, insecure and imperfect Hermione. And I really like the use of the oxymoron "marred perfection" too. Good job!!!

Simple is good. And this fic proves it. You didn't change the style or anything towards the end and I love it. ^_^ Great fic!

Aww...I loved it. I can truly relate to Hermione here--why can't people take notice of you, your personality, and stop fussing so much over your appearance?

Great job. I really enjoyed it!

Nice!! Very nice!! Reminds me of that line, that if you love someone, no matter how plain he/she is, that person can become the most beautiful person that you've ever seen. (The Truth about Cats and Dogs.) It would be a dream beyond reckoning if Harry could realise that in the canon, but we all know that this may never happen. So, it's fantastic that we have writers like you who keep the ideas floating... what a lovely story!

H/Hr rules!!!!

beginning. The one person that understands and knows him through and through - his fears, his weaknesses, his strengths, his flaws. The one person who has been with him through everything, and sees him as the real, not superficial, human he is - as well as a hero.


Her musings are confirmed when he leans over and whispers into her ear - which just so happens to be a sensitive spot - words that she finds herself smiling and blushing delicately at.
beginning. The one person that understands and knows him through and through - his fears, his weaknesses, his strengths, his flaws. The one person who has been with him through everything, and sees him as the real, not superficial, human he is - as well as a hero.


Her musings are confirmed when he leans over and whispers into her ear - which just so happens to be a sensitive spot - words that she finds herself smiling and blushing delicately at.
beginning. The one person that understands and knows him through and through - his fears, his weaknesses, his strengths, his flaws. The one person who has been with him through everything, and sees him as the real, not superficial, human he is - as well as a hero.


Her musings are confirmed when he leans over and whispers into her ear - which just so happens to be a sensitive spot - words that she finds herself smiling and blushing delicately at.
beginning. The one person that understands and knows him through and through - his fears, his weaknesses, his strengths, his flaws. The one person who has been with him through everything, and sees him as the real, not superficial, human he is - as well as a hero.


Her musings are confirmed when he leans over and whispers into her ear - which just so happens to be a sensitive spot - words that she finds herself smiling and blushing delicately at.
beginning. The one person that understands and knows him through and through - his fears, his weaknesses, his strengths, his flaws. The one person who has been with him through everything, and sees him as the real, not superficial, human he is - as well as a hero.


Her musings are confirmed when he leans over and whispers into her ear - which just so happens to be a sensitive spot - words that she finds herself smiling and blushing delicately at.