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it's so nice.i really loved it...i hope you'll write more stories |
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shika17Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/07
hahaha aawwwhh~ i know im a bit slow cuz u wrote this 2 yrs ago and i jsut read it but this story is reli sweet. i agree with it being cliche but in the end wen a guy tries to be sweet it sort of comes out cliche in the end. and yet! we all still want to hear wat he wants to say  |
Author Feedback: I'm not sure I would, but won't know unless it happens.
Thanks for the review. |
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Sweet story! I like the use of the line Ultimate Git! I started cracking up! Looking forward to your next chapter! |
Author Feedback: Yeah well, it's true isn't it?
Thanks. |
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I definitely loved that! It was so very sweet, and fluffy and adorable! It was very well written as well, and I loved the humour that you added to it 
I'd like to see more of your work (which I will be off to check out as soon as I am done writing this review).
I'm positive you can expect more reviews from me.
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/06
Oh that was insanely cute. I loved it. Oh, now I think I know what your next fic...the "proofread" is going to be abourt. Well, I'm going to now read that... |
Author Feedback:  You're probably right
You might enjoy the other more, I know I enjoyed writing more. |
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love it love love it *squeel*  
the part "Harry felt his heart sink and his ego begin to bruise" i imagined Harry half pouting half frowning, and went aww..lol ^^ Hermione's right, it is abit cliche but also incredibly sweet. |
Author Feedback: LOL, thank you |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/05/06
*squeals* that was AWESOME!! I SOOOO LOVED READING THAT! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/04/06
That was really cute. I loved it to death. Great job. Lovely, lovely piece. I am going to go read the companion fic right now. Lovely.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks, the companion can stand on it's own but I think the two complement each other nicely. |
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Hermione, whose eyes had closed during the second kiss, opened her eyes, which were shining brightly, “Oh…well it’s just that you’re whole speech, well it was kind of cliché you know.”
and the part where he says that he bought half of a section in a library were especially funny. It was really brilliant! |
Author Feedback: Thank you, I so see them this way in the future...just wish JKR agreed with me |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06
Awwww absolutely adorable, i really loved it! ! ! Great job! ! ! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much |
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Awww....good job! Cliche........matches the story! Yeah, I know.....I'm slow. It was quite cute. I liked the bathroom part the best, hehe! |
Author Feedback: Lol, thank you. |
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I just love it . It ROCKS . Hope you write more fanfic! Oh, and if you want me to read more of your stories make them when they are adults. |
Author Feedback: So far, that's all I have written.  |
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That was cute. Though I'm one of those that finds them pinning over each other for years to be kind of unrealistic. lol Great little fic! |
Author Feedback: Thanks. It was kind of part of the whole "cliche" theme" |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/08/05
i think you should have named the fic -Sometimes I Like Cliche- |
Author Feedback: Well, thanks for the imput |
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Cliche is right! Whoa! I wouldn't mind having half of the Charms section of Flourish and Blotts... *grins* Hehehe...
I really enjoyed this ficlet!
Great job!
~*Eli
Mione is right... Cliche is nice sometimes. |
Author Feedback: I would like to think that if a guy was so cliche in a line with me I wouldn't fall for it...but if I was head over heals in love with him I might...right after laughing just as Mione did. |
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