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Oh dear i stumbled across this story in history and now I fear I will never get any work done I have skipped lunch to finish it. I love it Ron always makes me laugh. Hes like I love Luna lol poor ronnikins!
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Author Feedback: I love Ron too  . Glad you enjoyed the story. Goodluck on your History work. |
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Erm... I think Hermione and Ron should be trained as well coz they'll be helping Harry. If they're not good enough then how could they help? |
Author Feedback: Trained in what? The animaguses?
Ron and Hermione have the ability to clear their minds before attempting to transform. Harry doesn't. Harry needs to clear is mind then he will be at the stage the rest of the students are at. |
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aww, that was a great chapter I loved it! please update more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
~Emma~ or ~HarryPotterlvr3~ |
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Great chapter! Glad they cleared the air!! I melted when he said that he never loved Ginny, and that he was in love with her. *sigh* I'm not surprised that they don't want to tell everyone. Although Ron would have to be seriously dense not to figure things out after a while.
And the feeling must be spreading, because now Ron likes Luna.... and tries to write a love letter to her. He's so cute about it... *dies laughing*
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tabinaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/09/05
hey you yeah im talking to you yea well i luv it hey are you finished yet for the next chapter cuz im dieing with that chapter |
Author Feedback: No sorry I haven't even written the next chapter. My computer is being fixed so I will write it on there, and I will hopefully have it back next Thursday. I know that so far away...im dying not being able to write my fic *tear*. But I am really glad you like it! |
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MioneUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/09/05
Great post,this ffc is really good and you are doing a great job with this,keep the good work and post more soon |
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This is very humorous! I like it! You did a wonderful job in writing this! Can't wait to read some more! |
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Hm...some pros and cons for this chapter. It was nice to see a little bit of embellishment into the relationship, but the flashback was handled a little awkwardly. Instead of going BAM! THIS IS A FLASHBACK, it should be handled more gradually, and should flow with the rest of the story. Also, Harry's decleration of love also felt a little clumsy. Hermione isn't even talking to Harry because she's mad at him -wouldn't it seem a little brazen to go in blazing like that? A bit more subtlty might've been more appropiate, maybe to ease from friendly concern to more emotional attachment over the next couple chapters.
Still, good job. Had fun reading! Curious to see where you take the story. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for taking the time to read...I will be clearing some things up a little better in the next chapter when you hear Hermione's side of the story. |
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Oh my goodness!!! For a moment there, I was just as confused as Hermione was, about what Harry was going on about. But it all ended so well... and not so well. Why did he just leave her? Why didn't he wait to see what she would have said? Men!!!! |
Author Feedback: Haha! Thanks alot for the reveiw. Harry has alot in inner demons he has to deal with aswell as his raging hormones so its pretty tough for Harry at the moment. But I will clear things up in the next chapter. |
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Author Feedback: Awww thanks for the great reveiw!! I am REALLY glad you liked it. Hahaha yeah Harry did act like a stupid git. |
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S.K.Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/09/05
Another excellent chapter! Harry finally admits his feelings to her, but she is in shock and Harry has to leave in order to stay sane! Keep 'em comin'! Harry and Hermione forever!
S.K. |
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spaz92Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/09/05
Awsome story , i love the ending  its so like dramatic and like the perfect kiss (sigh) well write more soon |
Author Feedback:  Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up next week! |
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NinaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/09/05
I like this story Justine ... even though I'm no Harry/Hermione shipper - I don't mind reading about them if its well written and this is so nice job =D hope I get to read more soon =D |
Author Feedback: Awww thanks Nina for taking the time to read |
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NinaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/09/05
Hey .... just though I would read this 1 .... tis a good start =D |
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/09/05
He just left her there? No way..you know, for a second when Harry was putting his foot in his mouth, i thought that maybe Voldemort had entered his mind again. I'm just glad that it wasnt the case.
I loved the flashback, though i must say that for a grown woman she was giggling a lot...but i loved it anyway.
This is a very intersting story and i'll be waiting to read on what happens next, whether if Hermione returns Harry's feelings or not.
Thanks for writing this story.
Take care and keep it up!!!
Sheryl |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. Yeah I understand that the end of this chapter may be a little confusing but I will clear everything up in the next chapter. Yeah she was giggling alot and I will also talk about that in the next chapter. Thanks for the great review. Glad you liked it. |
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