cdanesSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/08/08
that was so so sweet. I love that Lily had the same problem and the mural was great! |
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AUDRIELSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 23/11/07
I enjoyed this fic immensely. I haven't read a HHr fanfic before where Hermione wants a baby without getting a husband first.
I only saw the plot's potential for comedy when I began reading your Chapter 4 when Hermione explains her decision to her friends. I began cracking up when Luna said Hermione doesn't need an actual man, just his best swimmers, then Ginny asked if one can order them like a pizza. I laughed even harder when Ron answered Hermione's rhetorical question (How else can I get pregnant?) with "Firewhiskey".
I love chapters 5 & 6 the most because they're entirely H-Hr. Harry is funny even in his perception of his love (...so why aren't you volunteering your best swimmers?...Him and Hermione, not Hermione and Spermsicle), sweet though inarticulate, painting a mural to express his love and narrating his dream of Hermione's future to plant a doubt in the wisdom of artificial insemination.
Although you gave us more than enough funny moments in chapters 7 & 8, there weren't enough detailed fluffy scenes. And you waited more than 5 more years to let Hermione have her pregnancy. She was in her early 30s then, she was just 25 when she found out about her condition. I mean why wait 5 years to get pregnant when you know you have only 10 more years of peak fertility period. Anyway, just asking.
I've read 3 of your earlier fics (2 of which are one-shots) and I'd say you've improved a lot. I reviewed only now because I don't want to give one sentence nonsensical reviews; I was waiting to be impressed with your writing. This fic did it for me.
Now I'm off to read more of your fics. I think I will love Where Elizabeth Stood; I'm a fellow Austenite by the way |
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AUDRIELSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 23/11/07
I enjoyed this fic immensely. I haven't read a HHr fanfic before where Hermione wants a baby without getting a husband first.
I only saw the plot's potential for comedy when I began reading your Chapter 4 when Hermione explains her decision to her friends. I began cracking up when Luna said Hermione doesn't need an actual man, just his best swimmers, then Ginny asked if one can order them like a pizza. I laughed even harder when Ron answered Hermione's rhetorical question (How else can I get pregnant?) with "Firewhiskey".
I love chapters 5 & 6 the most because they're entirely H-Hr. Harry is funny even in his perception of his love (...so why aren't you volunteering your best swimmers?...Him and Hermione, not Hermione and Spermsicle), sweet though inarticulate, painting a mural to express his love and narrating his dream of Hermione's future to plant a doubt in the wisdom of artificial insemination.
Although you gave us more than enough funny moments in chapters 7 & 8, there weren't enough detailed fluffy scenes. And you waited more than 5 more years to let Hermione have her pregnancy. She was in her early 30s then, she was just 25 when she found out about her condition. I mean why wait 5 years to get pregnant when you know you have only 10 more years of peak fertility period. Anyway, just asking.
I've read 3 of your earlier fics (2 of which are one-shots) and I'd say you've improved a lot. I reviewed only now because I don't want to give one sentence nonsensical reviews; I was waiting to be impressed with your writing. This fic did it for me.
Now I'm off to read more of your fics. I think I will love Where Elizabeth Stood; I'm a fellow Austenite by the way |
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AUDRIELSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 22/11/07
I enjoyed this fic immensely. I haven't read a HHr fanfic before where Hermione wants a baby without getting a husband first.
I only saw the plot's potential for comedy when I began reading your Chapter 4 when Hermione explains her decision to her friends. I began cracking up when Luna said Hermione doesn't need an actual man, just his best swimmers, then Ginny asked if one can order them like a pizza. I laughed even harder when Ron answered Hermione's rhetorical question (How else can I get pregnant?) with "Firewhiskey".
I love chapters 5 & 6 the most because they're entirely H-Hr. Harry is funny even in his perception of his love (...so why aren't you volunteering your best swimmers?...Him and Hermione, not Hermione and Spermsicle), sweet though inarticulate, painting a mural to express his love and narrating his dream of Hermione's future to plant a doubt in the wisdom of artificial insemination.
Although you gave us more than enough funny moments in chapters 7 & 8, there weren't enough detailed fluffy scenes. And you waited more than 5 more years to let Hermione have her pregnancy. She was in her early 30s then, she was just 25 when she found out about her condition. I mean why wait 5 years to get pregnant when you know you have only 10 more years of peak fertility period. Anyway, just asking.
I've read 3 of your earlier fics (2 of which are one-shots) and I'd say you've improved a lot. I reviewed only now because I don't want to give one sentence nonsensical reviews; I was waiting to be impressed with your writing. This fic did it for me.
Now I'm off to read more of your fics. I think I will love Where Elizabeth Stood; I'm a fellow Austenite by the way |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 18/10/07
This story doesn't seem to be finished. Yes, we know about what harry predicted in his visions of the future, but did it all go to plan, or will there be more suprises. Hopefully there is a sequel to this story. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!! |
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I always come back to read this...it's one of the nicer stories around.
I like the humor and the the resolution.
I am looking forward to your other stories. |
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NariSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/06/07
Very good ending! Completely different from the beginning of the story but good nonetheless. The whole thing is excelent. Really looking to more amazing stories from you. I'm keeping my eyes peeled!  keep up the great writing. |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/02/07
aawwww... i little sad in the ending but i like the way you put harry imagining "his" life with hermione in the "supposedly" future... good job..
I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!! |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 11/02/07
wow..good chapter.. so, that's what ron's doing? he's trying to make hermione back-out from the baby thing but turns out, it backfired.. now, i know ron's not that much of a dunderhead.. I like the ending of this chapter... harry's very sweet...
I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!! |
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casledSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 09/12/06
very good story you had me going for a while that next day i thought she did go through with it. great story keep up the great writing |
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LMAO she almost had a heart attack  Luna is so much like Phoebe haha Oh and I really liked the style of this last chapter. Haha I know you wrote this a while ago but I just found it after reading "Just Thinking". Anyway...as you can probably tell, I loved the Friends quotes  and the humor itself. Very funny and sweet. Great job |
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Yea I recognized the Friends quotes instantly. LOL They seriously did make me laugh out loud
“Lips moving, still talking,”
“She doesn’t need an actual man, just a couple of his best swimmers,”  Anyway...must continue reading hehe |
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kwmanateeUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 24/09/06
"Their passion play had only just begun..."; I love how you slipped that in there. |
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kwmanateeUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 24/09/06
"Their passion play had only just begun..."; I love how you slipped that in there. |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 11/09/06
Wonderful story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Love the way Harry decided to tell Hermione he loves her, that was so sweet. And of course the end was fabulous, so sweet and just lovely.
Great job, and I can't wait to go and check out your other stories. Keep em coming!
~Cat |
Author Feedback: Wow, I just randomly checked the reviews for this story and came across yours! I can't believe it's been a year now since I wrote this fic, but I think it's my favorite. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a review! |
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