Ron's chapter is surprising since it's a very different Ron than is usually portrayed in H/Hr stories. It's the Ron from canon, but he's much more aware of what's going on around him, once it's something he can see and touch.

You paint a picture of his friendship and love for the both of them that is very deep and compelling. He knows, both what he feels for her and what they feel for each other and he accepts the both.

All in all, a very compelling snapshot of the three of them and how their lives were changed by one evening.

Very nicely written

Harry's chapter is also very him, but it's also them. I really like how he's always part of what's happened, yet he's still looking forward. His acceptance of what has happened is the most anticlimactic of the three, yet you show how it's the most profound since he simply acknowledges that she's been that part of his life he can count upon.

I really like how the chapter captures Harry's sense of responsibility for the other two, yet he isn't crippled by guilt for what has happened or will happen.

I'm coming to this story late, which is too bad since it's an excellent glimpse at the three lives involved (I'm cheating a bit, I read all three chapters and then came back to review)

The chapter is very her, and yet very them. That moment when she realizes she's not caught between the two of them, she's passing between the two of them is very good. It's apropos that she be the first to realize exactly what has been happening for the last six years.

The use of the shadows and light as part of what they're going through is very strong.

Wow!... *hold on*...*I can-*....... *I can't form coherent thoughts*...*give me a minute*....*stil-*
... *I thin-*...*nope still speechless*... *I think I am o-*... *ok now I am fine*... *NOW I am*

But really that IS my reaction to this brilliant story! You caught Ron so well!! And think of it their love (Harry and Hermione) made him a better person. You capture his emotions so perfectly that I felt my throat clog up countless times during the story You captured Ron better than any proffesional author could ever *coughJKRcough* have done and you made him absolutely perfect in terms of character's. The emotion portrayed was done amazingly. And I loved that after he vowed to NEVER leave Harry's side I think that was amazing!!! Seriously I am in awe of your masterpiece!! I would write more but my mom is- needing the comp! srry!! But BRILLIANT story and SENSATIONAL characterization!!

xoxo
Hana

Wow!! That's really good!!!!!!!! The ou characterization's are just absolutely mind-blowing! You show their fears, insecurities, hopes absolutely perfectly and the way of thinking brilliantly. You truly capture their characters absolurtely stunningly! WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! That was my reaction after reading this amazing chapter!! You are a amazing writer and you write very touching things and very visualistic (is that even a word??) story! I could feel chills on my spined when Harry was afraid and everything I just could see it WOW! The emotions, the sincerity!! WOW! I probably have used this word a lot but it is true and I can't think of any word to desribe the utter brilliancy of this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It is extremely heart-felt and the reader (well atleast moi) can relate in terms of emotions really well!! You captured it brilliantly!!!

xoxo
Hana
xoxo
Hana

Wow... hold on I just need to regain my ability of speech-to-typing...still not recovered...
That was scarily piercing to the soul, not in a bad way though but in that elation way you know those moments? It felt like that. It felt like I WAS Hermione. You connected it to the reader so well. It is truly an amazing chapter/story. I am in pure awe. I clicked on this fic to add you too my favourite author's list to read your other works to click on your name and read it but not in a million years could I have expected such an amazing spectacle. It was so beautiful and so touching and the Harmony caught so amazingly I am speechless, utterly mind-blown. Wow, there is no words to convey the sheer brilliance of it.

The thoughts, the feelings were captured so perfectly. The reason why no words needed to be spoken, so simple yet so deep. An utterly simple yet so DEEP and mind-blowing! WOW!

Now I am going to rush off to the next chappie

xoxo
Hana

epilogue? please. i really enjoyed this story. very intense and great perspectives. epilogue!!

Well, Ron finally grew up, and opened his eyes. I am proud of Ron right now. Way to go Ron!!! He finally understands that Harry needs Hermione. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Ron really handles it. Hopefully it won't take too long. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!!

I was impressed so much. Usually, the few conversations are in the story, the less interstingfor me but your stories are very interesting.

Thank you for writing.

Wow! This gave me chills, especially when Ron started thinking. To see these things from Ron's POV really enables us to back up and actually look at the interactions between Harry and Hermione, which sometimes is the best way to watch.

All in all though, a great story. Every POV is very well done. Thank you for posting, and keep up the great work!

Wow!
That is, indeed, deep fluff. Beautifully written, paced and polished deep fluff.
Excellent job.

What a beautiful conclusion to this story. Ron is not always as dense as he seems and you engineered his realizations of the relationship brilliantly, stage by stage. Superlative job!

I love this chapter, too. So now we have Harry's perspective. Very enjoyable. It was good to hear your take on his feelings and need for Hermione. Good job!

Wow. This was so powerful, so sweet. It was a perfect analysis of Hermione and her relations with Harry and Ron and of why Hermione and Ron could never really work. Great job!

Ok, i'm am hp/hg shipper (quite obvious being there...) but i'm also optimistic deep down so i lov when we dd not have to bash Ron to let Hermione be with Harry.
Very well done, darkness with maybe a little light at the horizont.
Ciao!