A good effort.Hermione swearing seems rather unusual though.The last 3-4 lines of your story was the part i liked best.It summed up H/Hr very nicely.

yay!! she kissed him!! haha.this is a great start and i can't wait to read more please update!!

HEY! It's not over yet is it? I hope not! Update soooooooon!!

great chapter as always.
but you wrote Hermione good there.
all you have to do now it to make harry realise what he feels for her.
great work on the chapter.

Aww...poor Hermione. Too bad she left before she could see Harry reaction. That would be interesting...
Anyway, update soon!!

huh? what is this about its the most stupid story i have ever read!

Once again, I think that Hermione did the most honest, impulsive thing that a person can do, when he/she is trying to make another person see their point of view. She uses logic and emotions, and how can Harry possibly stand up to that, when he's built the same way? Great chapter!

Ever the optimist, that Hermione! Good for her!

Oohh, I didn't know you were going to continue on with this! Squee!

Heh. Hermione jumping Harry is love. And I love you. XP

great chapter.

18. Maybe that's why you love him. He's strong-minded, like you. You like that in a man. Makes for a good husband, a good father.


19. Not that you're assuming you will someday have his babies.


20. Because you won't.


21. Unfortunately.


22. Unless you force him.


23. But that's called rape

HAHAHHAHAHAHA, oh my god, these lines are just so...hahahahahhahahaha, I love this story! Update soon!

you write such good stories!!!! even though i like r/hr, i still like to read your stories, lol.
oh, this is kayla, just to let you know, haha.

haha, the guy has it so bad, “Okay, fine! Yes! Yes! I would die for you, Hermione! I would kill for you, I would do ANYTHING to protect you, alright? Are you still questioning my loyalty to you or do you need further convin-“ he might as well say the words, and hermione's reaction, very good, of course i would have loved to see what would have happend if she stayed.

this is a great story so far and
i tend to stick with it

Dude! Seriously write a sequal! I wanna know what happens next!

signed,
cra_Z_4_JC

This story is fantastic! I love the way you have characterized Hermione and the way that Harry found out. The list was hirlarious. And would explain a lot of things in the sixth book...anyway update soon!

Awesome again... But question... this takes place before the first chapter right? Since its July, and the 1st one was in September... Just making sure... ... But I liked it, again.