Aww, very cute. That was pretty much adorable. When they admitted how far they would go to protect the other, I was sighing out loud. And then Hermione's "impulse move": good for her! I see the possibility of another list in her future now that she knows how the beginnings of some of her "other" thoughts feel. Haha, when she picked up her boxers, I definitely laughed out loud. And then such a sweet, hopeful ending. *crosses fingers for great luck to Hermione and Harry* Fantastic story!

Haha, I could picture Hermione sitting down and writing something like this! You definitely let your inner most thoughts go when you write a list like this. See, because I've written non-sensical lists like this. Different topic; same basic blabbering, random comments to myself. And as sad as that may be, this chapter was absolutely wonderful! (Though the last few lines were pretty bittersweet.) Lovely, lovely, lovely, especially: 25. Sigh. Wonderful!

ooh nice start. cant wait to see what happens next

This is a pretty good story. I love hermione's attitude in it. And harry is just so clueless! haha but please keep up the good work by updating soon so you wont leave me hanging and make me figure the rest of the story out on my own. hahaha Keep up the good work!

Good story, shows Hermione's honest humor. Good plot and formatting; I do however object to the site's use of review hijacking

Oh wow! I love your characterization of Hermione! She's brash and brave, and I love the way she speaks in her note, and she's IMPULSIVE. I like it. She's much more human this way.

"For the first time in a long time, Harry Potter is sitting in a compartment on Hogwarts Express completely alone. Of course he isn't going to sit with Ginny, no, they have history now," HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! That really makes me smile than should be allowed.

I LOVE YOU. That is all. Now come back from being nekkid plz.

I love this.

It's hilarious. You have a smartass way about and your writing is awe strucking. This is exactly what I pictured when I thought of Hermione expressing her feelings. Or Harry. That was perfect, I loved the "Old Bat" bit. It was what I expect when Hermione finally blows up in Petuia's face. And I can't wait until she does again. So please, have her blow up again.

Adding it to Favorites. You're becoming a favorite writer.

RayRay

Wow, that was really good. I loved Hermione's list, it was sooooo...Hermionesh. And the kiss, wow, you should really get to work, I can't wait to read the next chapter, mwhahahahhhhahahaha. Good job!!

Hmmm... I got the strong impression from your first chapter that it was a one shot. Obviously I was wrong.

I apologize by the way for saying in my previous review (of chapter 1) that the ending "sucked." I thought that you were ending the story and the end of chapter one seemed extremely abrupt and harry's reaction seemed very ambiguous.

I like the interaction between Harry & Hermione, especially her questions to him.
-Korval

I will observe that (so far) there is no obvious link or flow between the first & second chapter. It's almost like they are both standalones.

Oops...didn't realize there was more to come but am ever so glad. Another wonderful chapter...you could almost feel her panic at what had transpired. Cannot wait for the next update.

its good very good alittle confused bcuz the two chapters where diffrent time line i guess or im just stupid but please stop writing end at the end of every chapter it makes it look like u've ended the story

so are you like, gonna make them have sex or something in the next part or something??

hahahaha

A good effort.Hermione swearing seems rather unusual though.The last 3-4 lines of your story was the part i liked best.It summed up H/Hr very nicely.