FathiahUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/06
wow, very good and funny. I love it. Make some more. I like funny stories. I'm adding you to my list of favourite authors. |
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Oh, that was absolutely wonderful! I simply adore Luna, and you captured her perfectly! Wow! Brilliant job! |
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jadaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/05
Great I loved it and luna is right ron and hremione don't seem right 4 each other and maybe ther is still hope 4 harry & hermione jk might come back and give those r/hr ppl a taste of their own medicene and keep righting it's very good |
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paxaureliaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/08/05
pretty good and amusing. i liked it - especially since i can relate to being called delusional now!!
very good idea. :-) |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/08/05
That was hilarious.. I love Luna!! Thank you for writing this.. Luna's point of view when done well is wonderful.. and you did an excellent job! |
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Lovely. I especially liked her observations on the bottoms of Ron and Neville respectively. I think you captured her character well. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I quite enjoyed writing the bottoms part, since I, myself, have found Neville's name rather amusing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/05
haha! this is such funny one shot, how it changes from one thing to another. wow, my foot is asleep. i've been sitting on Swenthres too long. Thiy cuase puople teo tpye bodli. |
Author Feedback: I've consulted the Quibbler, and it says that you merely need to shake the infected limb and stomp/hit it until the Swenthres falls out. I hope that helps. And thank you for the lovely review. |
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OriUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/05
I really like this. This is certainly a fresh look at their relationship. Great job!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Well, Luna is a rather interesting character, so she must look at relationships differently! |
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Radity05Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/05
I think this is halarious, i love it!! Its so funny, and exactly how we would think Luna would think. Seeming as shes so dreamy and just floats around, you would think her of all people would pick up on things others dont see!
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Author Feedback: Exactly! Just because she doesn't look like she's paying attention doesn't mean she's not! Thanks! |
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This is the first story that I've read from Luna's POV, and I found it quite enjoyable. I think you did a great job of getting inside Luna's head, and I think that she would be one who would perceive Harry and Hermione's relationship clearly. She's never come across as stupid... after all, she is in Ravenclaw!
Truly original in its humour and wording! Liked it a great deal! |
Author Feedback: The first? I'm flattered! I'm glad you liked it! And of course she supports our sinking ship! She always believes in things that are said to not exist, right? And she is intelligent enough to be in Ravenclaw and not fail Herbology |
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Sorry, accidently left out one thing in my first review:
I think you did a fantastic job at writing Luna's thoughts. It seemed like exactly something she would think about. Great job! |
Author Feedback: Well, yes, the beginning was rather dull to write, but the rest was oh-so-much fun. Luna is so perseptive! Too bad everyone thinks she's delusional... -sigh-
And thank you! I am very pleased with this fic, and how well everyone says I did Luna. |
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Hmmm this was an orginal idea. At first I wasn't sure if I'd like it, but then I kept on reading it and realized that it defintely was funny and interesting. Seems like Luna's got the pairings right! |
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LMAO....you got Luna down perfectly in my humble opinion.
bloody good show. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm very flattered... Not much else to say...
Bloody good show! |
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I think you got Luna's point of veiw on things perfectly. I don't agree with Luna on much though. Like Hermione and Harry, but mabey that's because I'm not a Harry and Hermione shipper. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! However, this was marked as a Harry/Hermione fic, so you had been warned! I suspect there was a slight Ginny bashing, but I don't know what other people saw... |
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Heheh.. I liked it! I love Luna... She's so funny... and you did a nice job at capturing her humor. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I tried to make it humorous without making Luna completely, well, loony. I'm happy to hear it worked. |
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