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ummmmm, it's our story. deal???? seeing that it was the story that brought us together??? |
Author Feedback: Okay, okay. it's Our Story. But it is NOT our story, because I wrote it all myself!! *says selfishly* But it's Our Story, like a couple's song that they first danced to is Their Song? Yeah...^_^
Thanks again!!
*licks*
x Cazzy x |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/11/05
WTF IS WITH THE JASMINE KID!!!!ok not the best...far from it no offence...but keep trying...NO MORE TWINSS...let harry wallow all alone..
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Author Feedback: Oh, Jas is important. And she gets kidnapped, so they don't realise they're twins til much later. And I hate Harry. I had to come up with a way to continue PP&VV and use Harry but not have the story centred around him...that would have driven me nuts!!
Thanks for the comments...we're each entitled to our own opinions...
x Cazzy x |
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sharonUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/10/05
lol, i really liked this ff.
but what i didnt like very much was lily having the twins so soon, and that remus was the godfather, and the twins thingy. but its coz i really liked the original way and its difficult to accept others opinions.
apart from that, good job!!
sharon |
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its nice, but its completely out of character. i cant think that harrys parents wedded cos of that/.... |
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NatiFcs28Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/05
a little dramatic no? but funny.
fyi sirius was his best man, and contractions don't begin till awhile after the water breaking. also, it takes hours to have a baby.
but just fyi.
-natali |
Author Feedback: I know, but Remy-baby needed a part.
And how am I supposed to know how long it takes? Plus I know that sometimes it's a short time.
ly,
x Cazzy x |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/05
i would ike to know what happened to jasmine in your story! my 1st thought was she got killed by Voldemort when he raided the house? or she lived and accedently grew up muggle and goes by another name? Maybe one of the giffendors in harry's year? you could do a great follow up with this and if you don't wanna i will i just need your permission to. Email me! |
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love love love. soooooooooo cute. Ive always wanted to read a story where they hated each other. i think i might actually write one. hope u enjoyed France, my native country u no. |
Author Feedback: *laughs* I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, it was cool in France, but we go every year so I'm used to it.
Your English is really good for you being French! You must have a good teacher.
Thanks!
x Cazzy x |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/09/05
very cute! ahahahahah... and i like the name of harry's twin sister, jasmine... that's because it's my name too... :d :d :d |
Author Feedback: I love that name, yeah. I chose it because it means grace, but also because it's a flower and following in the Evans tradition of naming their females after flowers.
It's a pretty name; feel happy you're called it!
x Cazzy x |
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FireEyes7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/05
ummm i thought it was okay, but i mean, Harry was an only child |
Author Feedback: Oh, I know...but never let things like that spoil your fun!! It's easy to create another character...I like my OCs!!
And anyway, I was thinking of writing a sequel one-shot to that about how Jasmine was kidnapped and Harry and Jas meet at Hogwarts...do you think it's a good idea??
x Cazzy x |
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wow caz i didn't even know you had writen this until you said you were in france then i was like " oh wow this is caz's story" |
Author Feedback: Huh? Is that a compliment?? *is confused*
Yeah, I wrote this on my penultimate day...that's why you wouldn't know I'd written it.
Why didn't you know it was mine??
x Kirstie x |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/08/05
ok this story wasnt as good becuz it didnt really follow the story line you know? but it was fun to read btw can you finish pink poison and violet venom quickly thanks |
Author Feedback: I'll try, I guess. But you know, it's hard!! Should be two more chapters.
And what do you mean, this doesn't follow the storyline??
Thanks!
x Kirstie x |
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That was pretty good and a good story line, but I have a couple things to say.
Wouldn't the friends feel guilty that they forced/tricked Lily and James into having sex? And then she ended up getting pregnant.
And also it was a little bit rushed, so the timeline was kind of confusing. But since this was a one-shot, I guess that doesn't really matter. It would have ended up being too long.
So another great story! Thanks! |
Author Feedback: No problem!
Actually, they didn't trick them into having sex as they didn't realise what it was going to do--they thought it would make the two fall in love--you know, make love? As in make love happen, not sex. They didn't mean for that to happen, and when it happened they knew they would fall in love. Nice girls. My main reasoning for them not realising is that the boys looked up the spell and didn't read it properly.
I added in all the months (that I did) because it was getting too short. I dunno if it was rushed, though. It took me hours to write!
ly, thanks!
x Kirstie x |
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