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You know I didn't read the author's notes at the beginning so I was quite surprised that you of all people was writing a Ginny/Harry. I'm so glad Draco'll be making an appearance. I look forward to the next chapter. |
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MagorianSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/11/05
The only problem I have with what you have written is that it appears that JKR wants Harry to end up dead or alone. He broke up with Ginny to protect her and probably also to keep her from distracting him. He did not want Ron and Hermione around him either but he promised to go to the wedding. Dumbledore, Sirius, and Harry's parents are dead. So we should consider that Harry will destroy the Horcurxes by himself with Ron and Hermione popping up every once in awhile and then he'll face Voldemort and they'll both die. This way JKR can finish the series without being bugged about writing a book eight. In fact, Neville should be the only one to survive and he will then go on to become Minister of Magic. I'm writing my own seventh year H/Hr fanfic so don't feel bad. Keep writing this story. You have all the great ingredients in place. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/08/05
i liked the 2nd chapter alot i cant wait for the next one |
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Ok, this is short. And now I want to know what's going to happen next. And if you don't update soon....
Anyway, I like the idea of turning Grimmauld Place into a second Hogwarts since it's closing.
Cheers! |
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I don't like it that you killed Ron in this story. But I'm sure you have your reasons. And so I am off to read the first chapter after the prologue. |
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smprsgrrlSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/08/05
Eeee! I came to find this story as soon as I finished HBP. I can't wait to read more.  |
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wow...so far, I like this. The characters are pretty true to canon, which I like. keep going, please! |
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MyancerisUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/08/05
A mention of H/G? Have you been hit over the head my dear? LOL
Promising start though. I'm looking forward to reading more although can you not bend the FIA rules a little because my browser hates Portkey...
You are evil you know, starting a new fic and leaving us hanging over Slytherins Bride. Not that I can talk of course, what with my new fic bunny and all... |
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lorien829Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/08/05
This is pretty good so far! Keep up the good work. |
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lorien829Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/08/05
This is an interesting start. It's a little short, but I'd like to see where you're going from here! |
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This is awesome!  Love the idea about Grimmauld Place too. Keep it up, and good luck with the Felix Competition. |
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Nice way to end this chapter! I admit, using Grimmauld Place for something good is very appealing.
I am looking forward to seeing how you get Ron and Mione broken up, as well as getting Ginny out of the picture. Maybe Sirius' mother can give her a talking-to. *sigh*
Anyway, keep up the good work.
Steph |
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Interesting start, Hgwarts is closed but the professors are still teaching in Grimmauld Pace. Also the fact that you are a Ron/Hermione shipper adds more interest to the story, I allways enjoy H/Hr stories written by R/Hr shippers (because they see their relationship from a very different point of view). One advice (don´t take it as a criticism) try to make your chapters a bit longer. Continue writting this. |
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ShalizaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/08/05
Hmmm...you're definitely off to an intriguing start. And I appreciate your starting off with canon to make things seem more realistic. Can't wait to see where you go with all of this, nice work!
Looking forward to the next part and I hope you post it soon!
 Shaliza |
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rodrigoSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/08/05
you have a interesting chapter here.
will befun to read how it develops.
good written.
great work. |
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