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Great story so far keep up the great work. Ron and Ginny are just going to have to grow up and see that Harry and Hermione are meant to be.
till next time
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Author Feedback: sorry about that. Pressed wrong button trying to stop it from scrolling.
Thanks for the review! Ron and Ginny haven't seen half of what Harry and Hermione have so, yes, they most definitely need to grow up. |
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Good stuff! I read both chapters, and I love how you've progressed the story, although I have to admit that I was a little confused as to the greater circumstances at first. No matter, I totally get it now, so it's all good.
I think that it's interesting how the jealous actions of Ron and Ginny precipitated what happened in the second chapter. That's just poetic justice, as far as I'm concerned. And I enjoyed how the comforting between Harry and Hermione was a two-way street, and that they realise what they have in each other, without even needing to say anything. Like I said, good stuff! Can't wait to see what happens next!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I wanted each chapter to show a stage in their bond with one another, so that's why certain stuff seemed unclear. You may have to wait for a bit until I can come up with a third chapter and write it. |
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This is really good. Great Job! I so love it! Keep up the good work. Can't wait til next chapter! |
Author Feedback: Thanks. Might be a bit since I still have yet to write it and have absolutely no idea what to write. |
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PattyUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/08/05
That was really really great,you did an wonderful job with this chapter,it was really sweet and i just love the way that they kissed  Please post more soon and keep the good work |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I have no idea what to do for Chapter three, so it may take some time to put up. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/08/05
of his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautiful |
Author Feedback: What the--- okay. thanks again for the review who or whatever you are! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/05
of his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautifulof his hair was long and blond, with a radiant yellow left eye. While the other half was pure black, and a red eye staring that the death eater. There was this heavenly glow about half his body, while a demonic one took the other half. The sheer neutrality of it was beautiful |
Author Feedback: What the--- okay. thanks for the review who or whatever you are! |
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That was great I hope you can keep up this great writing.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I'm having trouble coming up with Chapter 3. But I'll update as soon as I can. |
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oh my god i loved this i've given you a 4 cuz it's awesome but could your chapters be longer i can't wait 4 the next one!!!!! |
Author Feedback: I wanted to end each chapter at the end of each stage of the bond they share. Chapter one was about talking to one another again. Two was about building on that. I have no idea what three's going to be about yet! |
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rodrigoSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/08/05
excelent chapter.
loved the way you wrote how they talked and supported eachoher on the nightmare thing.
and sneaky little Harry, making a bigger bed, smart of him.
very clever writing.
great work.
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Author Feedback: Thought it was time for a role reversal. I implied that Hermione was often the one to comfort Harry, well now it's her turn for being comforted. And I didn't make the bed bigger for that reason! Hermione had just witnessed Harry dying right in front of her, so she obviously needed the reassurance that he was still very much alive. It's either that or neither of them get anymore sleep cuz she won't close her eyes, afraid that when she does, he'll die.
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AnastasiaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/05
This is really a cool chapter.I liked the way that Harry was helpping Hermione to bed.  |
Author Feedback: I wanted to show the role reversal here. Usually it's Hermione helping Harry. Now it's Harry helping Hermione. It gets better next chapter. I may update without betas reading it.....They like sleeping. |
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This was really good so far! Hurry and update! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Author Feedback: It'll be a shocker, that's for sure. I will update as soon as my betas put their input in it. It may be a bit cause they like sleeping. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/05
I like this a lot! I hate it that ron and ginny overreacted! lol update soon! |
Author Feedback: I had to make them overreact since Ron has the emotional range of a teaspoon and Ginny's is a tablespoon maybe.
Next chapter has a bit more twist to things |
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striderSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/05
a weasley overreacting? im shocked! i would never believe it if it hadnt been written on page. I especially cant believe ron, he would never lose his temper and act all jealous. where is super ginny-sue? shouldnt she have just started launching her fearsome bat bogey hex from hell onto any and all regardless of guilt or responsibility? what's with hermione being all logical and caring, that's just so out of character, and where is the monster in harry's chest!?.
good story and am looking forward to more.
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the above was totally tounge in cheek |
Author Feedback: That was what most were expecting, but I figured that everyone went back to as normal as possible after Harry and Ginny's break up.
I'll update when I get the next chapter from my betas. *whispers* they like to sleep A LOT! |
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PattyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/05
That was a goos start,i really hope that you post more soon and keep the good work because this really was a great start |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I just have to get it back from my betas. They like to sleep! |
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kensitSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/05
well this sounds like it will be a great story . i can't wait to read the rest. |
Author Feedback: I should update later today. Just hafta wait on my two betas. (They tend to take awhile) meanwhile, sit back, enjoy and read the rest of my fics! |
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