very goos so far. it makes you want to learn more!

Nice story so far.
Are they going to tell each other about their feelings?
I do hope so.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Good job.

It's a shame, really that you don't continue this story. It is really good and I like you writing style. Hope to read more someday!

I've been wondering what would happen next. I hope to see an update soon, or I can always wait for the update. This story is one of my favorites!

Very lovely chapter. My most favorite angst chapter...

good but you realy need to finish the story

ah! don't stop there! please update?

will there be more? you said the secound part will live up to it's r rating and it didn't so i'm guessing that was just the first part? as in the first two chapters are the first part..so will there be two more? anyway, update soon!

Dont leave me hangin like that, its pure torture!!! Great story, keep it comin!!!

Dont leave me hangin like that, its pure torture!!! Great story, keep it comin!!!

Dont leave me hangin like that, its pure torture!!! Great story, keep it comin!!!

Hey!!! Are you going to continue this? cuz its really really really good! Pls post the next part soon!

oooooooooooooooo, cliffy. i really like. more soon please

Very good! I like your play with words. Please continue!!

good good (i hate these things)