amazing story

i know you probably already kno that though

anyway, this is my favorite story on Portkey as of yet and its the story i replace Deathly Hallows with

by the way, keep up with Beyond The Looking Glass! i'm dying to know whats happening next, and you haven't written since April!

continue please!

hope all is well

- C.T. Bishop

Wonderfully written, it was an engaging and moving story you wove, thank you!

This is a very good chapter. I am just starting to read FF and this seems to be a good start. cant wait to read the next one, oh wait, i dont have to...it is already there.
thanks for a very good first chapter.

I have to say I was utterly blown away with this story. I loved the interaction with the characters (a little bit of naughtyness is always good too!). You're writing is smooth and effective. The story flows and the plot is consistent. Well done!!!

This chapter (48) is perhaps where this story (the plot) starts to go horribly wrong, there are two terrible and nearly unbelievable errors of judgement, one of which could lose the war:

Stiffing Mundungus is most unwise. Sure, he's very marginal in canon and loathsome in this story, but he just put into our heroes hands something that might give them the edge they need in what's likely to be the 2nd most difficult task before them. What did Hermione sacrifice in future utility from him by it?

Worse is Arthur's decision, once more, to keep Harry out of the loop. There are so many ways this could go wrong it's hard to count:

They know Voldemort will be there, what makes him think any of the Ministry strike force will escape from it? They have the advantage of surprise, and will likely whittle down the number of DEs, but that's a big sacrifice for a small gain. These people might be desperately needed for something else, like the final fight.

Much worse is the lack of coordination. Suppose the attack is on Hogwarts. Suppose on that very day Harry and the DA are storming the castle they just got info on. Whatever the time line, Arthur has decided to divide the forces of the light ... that is a gamble you try to avoid, especially when you have nearly two weeks to think about it.

Anyway, Harry and Hermione know they don't have much time. It would be really helpful if they could actually put a date on it....

actually, i sorta hoped Hermione would get killed off, then ron realizes hes gay and goes to live with some buddhists to deal with his new feelings for men, and luna realizes that her brain had been infested with wrackspurts causing her to have affection for the red haired twit. then through a long and fulfilling adventure/independant!Harry story, Harry and Luna fall in love.

but your story is quite well done, congrats

I have to wonder if you are some sort of dyke lover, I mean you not only have dear old Nev knocking off two at the same time you got yhem knocking each other off as well, seema there must be more wierd folk in your head than one would normally find in a group of seven people. besides having dykes in the story down grades it quite a bit, especially if you just happen to be normal and think that lesbo's and queers are an abomination against nature.

Thanks.You cured a crappy feeling i had almost three years since reading HBP.This is how the story should have ended.Sorry ,no interest in sequel.Supers,even magical ones,are boring.

WOW! Let me just say that this fic was amazing. I found it about four days ago and haven't stopped reading. I have loved it so much. Thanks for creating such a beautiful and amazing story. I am sad that you killed off Ron and Luna, but I understand the difficulties an author faces. I would also love to know how Dumbledore came back, as I don't do well with subtext, but I don't need to know. This was a wonderful story, thank you so much!

OMG!!!!!!!!! WHO WAS THAT WITH GRAN LONGBOTTOM?????!!!!! *runs off to see what happens next* Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Hi, great story, but get eloped, what is that supposed to mean? A couple can elope which means ron off and get married, or they can simply get married but they can not get eloped, its a silly statement and a writer as good as you should avoid silly stuff like this.

I really am enjoying this story so far. It's been such a long time since I've read any Harry/Hermione fanfiction that was well-written and actually believable! I can't wait to read the rest. Thanks for posting this story!

I would love to know where to find these raccoons in Britain, It would make me world famous to find a new animal living here that has never been seen before, I mean racoons in Britain, how silly are you yanks to think that every where in the world is like America, blooming heck Americanisms are bad enough as it is, you should remember that the rest of the world developed without your country being known.

Right before I go on I have to say that I just love this tale and I am now rereading it for the third time, now on to my little niggle.
I would like to know why it is that Harry has small damp explosions going off on his forhead ie gently swept damp bangs off of his forehead.
As a speaker of the queens English and not understanding the odd and sometimes ridiculous Americanisms 'likes most of the world population'
I would love to read a story where explosions or guns going off or cars back firing did not happen on Harry Potters forehead.
Please try to write without American slang making me laugh or get annoyed in the wronog places.

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u