Brownstone is an odd word, I assume it refers to a house. For the information of our less informed Americanised friends I think you should know that much less than one percent of houses in Britain are built of something other than brick or stone, and none of the stone I ever saw was called brownstone. I've seen sandstone and Granite, I've even seen a few that are built with a green stone, but never a brownstone. Like I said an odd word from america once again.

First I would like to point out that if you don't know the meaning of a slang word then you should not use it. 'Wotcher' is a slang word that means 'hello how are you' or 'good morning what are you doing today' it is not a word to use the way this writer has used it.

Great first chapter - I have read a couple of your one-shots and thought I would now give one of your "big" stories a go...Your author's note is intriguing and I'm really into this story already, looking forward to the rest of it!

A small question, where the heck is the part that ties this chapter to the first one. where is the part that comes after the bed room scene.

::Harry\'s breath caught, as a growl of something ate its\' way up from the pit of something. His eyes hardened as he started to say something, then without any warning another old companion came home to roost. Neville\'s a nice bloke. Hermione voice rang in his head; he\'ll be good for her. \"Good for you Ginny.\" Harry put in with a genuine smile. He yawned, \"I don\'t know about you guys but I would like to go to bed.\" Hermione gave him the feeblest of nods as his eyes caught hers and she got up.

\"Ok Harry, we\'ll work on this tomorrow. At Godric\'s Hollow she mentally finished. Her eyes caught the five splayed fingers Harry held down by his side as she and Ginny left out the door to the room and closed it behind them as Harry was walking to his trunk to get sleep pants out. He dug for a second; then glanced over suddenly as a soft whirring penetrated his tired thoughts to find the sneakascope still spinning.

So you leave it just up in the air and dont even comment on what was the five finger thing for, or what about the sneakascope.

Great story, I really enjoyed the way you put it all together. I also really liked the fact that you left certain questions unanswered it is more fitting that things are not black and white, without a clear answer it makes a story better at times, this story being one of those times. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Cel

This is very well written and now I am off to read the rest

Awesome story, have read it many many times. Lost my bookmark, but found the story again in another person's profile.

Awesome story, have read it many many times. Lost my bookmark, but found the story again in another person's profile.

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful story. I have read the complete series twice now. One of the best.

Extremely well written. One of the best I have ever read. I completely prefer this story to the actual books.

I love this story. Made me laugh, cry and made me feel any emotion in between.

I'm always a Harmony shipper, and the added Ron/Luna, and bits of Ginny/Draco was great too.

Evil psycho Molly!

I definitely have to say this is my book 7. DH be Damned
Can't wait to start the sequel.

Thanks so much for this astounding story. May you continue to be as brilliant as you are now

Dude great story I loved every second of it and realy approtiate the longer stories over the 10 to twenty chapter ones seriously great work and thank for the awsome read

Okay, just a couple of things. If you ever get around to editing, the biggest thing is that you have a LOT of run on sentences to break up. There are plenty of places where a period would've sufficed better than a comma. There's also some things that need to be capitalized, and some things that ARE capitalized that shouldn't be, and a few missing words that made sentence structure awkward. I'm saying this as a heads up, not as a flame, because obviously I would've mentioned this much earlier and stopped reading if it bugged me that much. Anyway, onwards and upwards! Overall, I'm enjoying the story so far!

This has way more chapters than any of the books. I like the development in each chapter.