i really liked this one. i hope to see an update soon. you did great.

Wow, such a unique and interesting fanfiction! I've never read one with such an awesome twist- very creative and very well-written. Keep up the good work!

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Great start, though it always seems I should be writing my own fan fiction, not reading other people's...

It's interesting how the past keeps changing and shifting, but some things remain constant. I'm looking forward to see how Harry and Hermione turn out through all this.

This is definitely different. Poor Harry nothing seems to want to work out right! Hopefully everything will work out for the best if the end.
Keep up the excellent work! H/Hr always!


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I hope you brought a map with you, some of us may get lost trying to follow along. Nothing like being able to correct things I guess. Keep up the good work, and keep that map handy!

So you lost interest in reading all my opinions huh?

Thanks for responding. I didn't want to have to give up reading this story because it was getting so interesting.

OK then I will put the important things here for you so you won't have to sort them all out.

6. I HATE RON WEASLEY and nothing will ever change that. The thought of Ron and Hermione together makes me violently ill to the point of vomiting.

11. OH I have thought of something else that will make me stop reading a fanfic in the fastest way. If there is any hint that Hermione had sex with Ron at all especially if he takes her virginity, I will immediately stop reading a fanfic. Even if Harry or some other guy takes her virginity then she starts to go out with Ron, I will stop reading. I can't stand the thought of Ron even looking at Hermione much less having sex with her. He is vile and most certainly not good enough to breathe the same air as Hermione and not worthy of touching her at all. I have just gotten to that point because of the disgusting thing called Book 6 which pushed my buttons and sent me over the end beyond my tolerance for crap like Ron. In my mind, only Harry should be allowed to take Hermione's virginity.

See the important one was at the bottom

Thanks again for responding.

PJ

I sad to say that without getting the needed response to my question about the Hermione/Ron issue, I might not be able to read more of the story.

I really can't read a story that has Ron with Hermione in any form of sexual relationship. I can't even stand the thought of him hugging or kissing her much less...anything else. (Again check my bio for more info on my feelings about the Ron issue)

The concept for this story is so interesting too. It would be a shame to have it spoiled so that I could not read more of it.

Well, I'm hoping that it won't be and that I will be able to continue to read more.

Please tell me if it goes into the things I can't read.

Thanks

PJ

This was a very strange chapter.

I had to read it a couple of times to get it to make some sense.

The thought of Hermione and Ron...cringe...dating each other...is only able to be stomached as long as dating doesn't mean they are having sex. That would get me to stop reading a fanfic faster than anything in the world. (Check my bio for more on the subject of what I think about Ron)

Please varify that Hermione and Ron have not had sex and will not have sex in this story. I need to be sure that there won't be any sickenly surprises that will send me running for the toilet to vomit. I have a very sensitive stomach over certain things.

Thanks in advance for your response to my inquiry.

PJ

That was great and diffrent.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

That was sad! Why did you have to make it that way for?! Anyway, keep up the great work and write a whole lot more soon!

really good chapter, adn great wrok.
and Hermione is there for Harry.
really good work.