I think this was one of the most realistic things I have ever read. Of course, everyone wishes that Harry will survive the end of the series, (even the ones who think he won't) and that this produced a very lovely image of a Harry that has fought, given up, fought again, and triumphed, and has remained the same person that he was always been inside. He's a little older, much more wise, but al in all, he's still Harry, and that's what matters most.
Good to see Ron and Hermione nagging and baiting each other, as per usual

This time in the fun, 'you're my friend and I love to mock you' way, not the 'I say cruel things to you and make fun of you endlessly but all in all, it's just because I can't show you my true feelings' way. (I'm still bitter about that whole "plotline".)
I love each bit that he directed toward each people, especially Remus trying to crawl under the table when he was singled out

I couldn't help but laugh there. I would say that it was good to see Toad-Lady and Former Minister Hear-No-Evil-See-No-Evil-And-Knock-Down-Harry-Potter-While-You're-At-It, but it wasn't. Okay, so Fudge got better in book 6, but Umbridge is a complete waste of space.
Harry's acknowledgements to the Weasley family, including Ron's muttered statement about setting Molly off again were positively lovely, and I'm glad that there was that little bit of encouragement from Ginny there, showing that their friendship wasn't gone.
I loved how Harry's eyes kept meeting Hermione's for reassurance, for encouragement, and for reassurance. This is exactly the reason that I love the Harry/Hermione dynamic.
And most of all, I love the last sentence of the whole story the best. I miss Sirius and Dumbledore

And, F.Y.I., you actually had my eyes a little moist with that final 'I believe' of Harry's.
All in all, lovely job

I enjoyed it very much.