MichelleUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/08/05
Your story sucks, it was way too rushed. It was really OOC.  |
Author Feedback: your Harsh!!! You suck too!!!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/08/05
okay sorrry and this isnt a flame but the only word that I would use to describe this story is 'huh?' it really didnt make any sence. If it had been longer and had less fragmented sentences and less holes in the story it would have been good. keep writing though practice makes perfect!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading. i'm soory if it didn't make sense, but this was suppose to be a one-shot story, but everyone told me to keep going, so i did. I am what you call a beginner writer. My sister is the one with the master storys, i am Shannon not Caity! ( Please read also my other story Far From my Love, Chapter 4 is in this Monday) Thanks!!!
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/08/05
that was....unusual. Very interesting...but kind of rushed. I liked it, but Hermione should have punched him too. |
Author Feedback:
I agree i guess i should've made Hermione punch Harry too. I know it was rushed. I started off with it being a one-shot story, then people told me to continue, that is your answer to that. I'm glad it was interesting. Remember this is Shannon not Caity! ( Also please read Far From my Love, i ahve half of the fourth chapter done it will be updated by Monday. Lots of people say its good.) Thanks!!!
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SerenaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/08/05
Gotta admit, I wasn't feelin' it cause Draco was really OOC and so was Harry (harry?a two-timer?)but it was definitely a good try. I've read some of your other fics and I know that you're a good writer. I just felt that it was rushed and everything happened to quickly. but keep writing cause you can definitely do better. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading. Yes Draco was supposed to be out of character. He loves Ginny is was trying to do anything to get to her. But at the end of the first chapter it turns out he wasn't good enough. though at the end of the story he got what he wanted. 
Harry if you read the part where he said something was wrong, hen wanted a second chance. Also remember this is Shannon not Caity. ( Please continue to read my story Far From my Love, my 4th chapter, i have half done, it will be updated by Monday) Thanks!
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Shannon
From Caity: Remember, this story, Far From my Love and Locked are Shannon's stroies. Nine Long Months, Someone's Watching Over Me, and Caught Redheaded are mine. Just so you don't get confused.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/08/05
H, Please continue to write yuor stroy it is so awesome. I luv these g/d stories. so keep writing !!!!!
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Author Feedback: Thanks i'll try t write more to the story 
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/08/05
I thought the story was pretty good but i thought that you should make it longer and tell what happens afterwards. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the advice, and yes i will make it longer. The whole idea of the story is that Darco is put under a spell, and turns magically stupid rtying to act romantic aroung Ginny. But the second you will see Ginny find out something dreadfull happens, then you will see the characters changing. Thanks for reading!!!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/05
 Sorry, but it was kind of a disappointment, I mean you can write, that's a fact, but Draco is so OOC that he's beceoming annoying (I know he's under a spell but even when he's talking with Blaise it's showing). I'm sure if you worked it out a little bit more and got it beta-ed, make a 2or3 chapters it could be a really nice story !!! But keep up writing ! |
Author Feedback: Thanks i'll start looking at all this stuff! |
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HPfanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/05
awwwwwww...thats sooo sad poor draco! 
but u should really really really consider continueing the fic its awsome!!!
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Author Feedback: Thanks for reading, but also this was a one shot story i can't continue. But thanks!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/05
Ok, this story was ok, but some of it didn't make sense and why did Ginny and Draco NOT get together? I mean, in order for it to be a G/D story, they have to be together. I think you should have thought this story over a little more before posting it. |
Author Feedback: I am sorry, you are right i should've looked over my story, this was a mistake, but thanks for reading!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/05
Uhm, that was a pretty crap story. There wasn't really anything in it :/ |
Author Feedback: Well i'm sorry if this was a peice of crap mabey i will just looked over next time. Sorry |
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