This whole piece felt rushed, though I liked what you were doing here.

Keep writing.

Four and a half!! I love it! And sooo sweet, what he gives her as his last gift! It's stupid how guys are "supposed" to have lost their virginity so young or they're not manly or whatever... it shows a lot of good about Harry that he didn't do it before. yay!

That was a great fanfic. It was deep, not rushed, really fluffy, and sounded realistic (well, as realistic as you can get in the world of magic, anyway). I really liked this fic. I rated it a 4. Good luck in the competition!!! --Sage

As much as they have changed, and as much as Hermione has loved/does love Harry, I doubt it would head straight to the bedroom. Even kissing passionately seems a little stretched. However, the last gift could have been something as simple as a promise ring, to be as close as possible for the rest of their lives (this doesn't mean marriage). Or perhaps a promise ring to marry if she doesn't find that perfect guy (Harry may be perfect to Hermione, but he is too humble to ever admit it).

Great possiblities, though.

Really nice read!

This is great considering it's your first fic. Fluffy and very enjoyable.

Got to admit I'm not particularly keen on the idea of Harry off celebrating with Ginny after Hermione's parents got killed, but that's just a tiny grumble. Apart from that it's great, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

This was great! I enjoyed it thoroughly! Sweet, thoughtful and well written.. Where are the men like this I ask you?! Looking forward to more from you!

Nicely done. You get Points in my book. Keep up the great work.

i gave it a rather good rating.
great work, excelent written.
hopefully you can write a sequel.
will be fun to read one of youre future work.

This was wonderful! While I have never been a fan of the Harry/Hermione connection, if it turned out this way I think I could change my mind. Can't wait for the next installment!

Very nice for a first fic! I look forward to more from you! Good Job!

It was alright. You did a good job for a first try. Not too shabby. Keep working on it, and I'm sure you'll soon be up with the fanfiction pro writers!

hello!

You did a pretty good job with this story. I'll say that you did have some grammer problems and such, but that was about it.

I liked the plotline for the story. It was too cute! I look forward to reading more stories from you!

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Wow! I can't believe this is your first fic! I'm very impressed - it was great!

Very good, especially for a first story! I enjoyed Harry's gifts to Hermione and the thought behind each one. There's nothing like H/Hr fluff to brighten one's day!

I absolutely loved this fic. Thank god someone directed Harry in the right direction. Someone seriously needs to hit him in the head for him to see that Hermione has been there all along.