I love this story! Very cute!!! It didn't have to be rated PG-13 though, it was more PG, nothing really happened... but it was really sweet!!! I think you should write that series of Astronomy Tower stories you were talking about! That would be great!!! Please do!
I loved it!
-Michelle

I liked the Hermione POV in this story. There's a lot of understanding between her and Harry, as well as plenty of UST. Nice work.

I liked it and it had that passion that you would expect from Harry and Hermoine. I enjoyed that you kept true to Harry and Hermoine's personalities and that you kept the moment chaste enough to be believable. So until your next story, may your muse visit often and soon,

Excellent title. It was a good way to bring Harry and Hermione together. I hope this isn't a one-shot.

Great job on this story. I cant wait to see what happens next!

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Very intriguing, though it left me rather unsatisfied. There should be a post-Voldie chapter, I say.

Aww, doesn't Harry know to make the first move? I know he kinda did, but not to its fullest. Oh well it was great fic i could literally feel the tension and love-vibe in there, i swear its thee romantic place to be during the night, a kind of entirely different room. Astronamy tower during the day, love room during the night! good one Padfoot!

-noname-

This is a really great fic its well done. Great h/hr fics should be this way.

Very nice. I love reading about them falling for each other - that's always my favorite part.

Ah. That was great. I love when Hermione's considerate of what's going on in Harry's life. Ho hum. Thank you for making my night a little happier. Keep it up.

I LOVED the story and hope you update soon, cant wait for more!
Thanks :thumbsup:

If you are indeed only a fourteen year old, you have a bright future as a writer. Nicely, deftly done, with some wonderful lines and excellent characterizations. Wish I had more time to read - I'll definitely be on the look out for more from you.
Lynney