no wonder Paracelsus has recommended this fic. compared to other stories here in Portkey, i must say this isn't an outright romance fic. not that it has to be. the subtle, matural way of interaction between the three of them is what we liked in the books, and -if i speak for myself- what i've been looking for in a fic.

so, in short, let me congratulate you. great idea and a great fic.

S.

i'm quite pleased with the way this chapter ended. Still, it's a bit weird to see that Rita has a conscience. So, i guess, she doesn't care how much damage the things she says do, as long as she knows they are lies.

S.

Uuuh... lovely! Especially the end... a great idea of how the happy end will be
Thanks for writing and sharing this story!
Lie

brillant story brilliantly well written bravo
p.s. sorry i didn't reveiw till the very last chapter it's the way i am

Very nice. Some people never discover the important things. I like how, it was Hermione having that type of a revelation. It gives her life a very different direction than she has been imagine since she was old enough to understand what sort of options there were. I wonder what they will end up doing with their lies.

what a wonderful story! i would have liked more harry/hermione lovin', but this story was still incredible. i loved the trio's relationship and i loved the way you ended each chapter with the...much more important.

keep it up!

Thanks for that great end to a great story. It was realistic which i liked.

Thanks again

Mippet

It was good....it just didn't really end in Harry Hermione...but I liked it all the same...subtle hints here and there...Im looking forward to more work.

It was a great ending! I haven't reviewed this fic yet, but I think it was a great idea and over motif (much more important). The only confusing part was where the plot hopped before and after the final battle. However, the plot was much more important .

It was a great ending! I haven't reviewed this fic yet, but I think it was a great idea and over motif (much more important). The only confusing part was where the plot hopped before and after the final battle. However, the plot was much more important .

I love this story since the first chapter, I liked the way it seem fresh and sweet. The way you portray the trio without so much words. You really show how there friendship is much more important than anything else.

so, a sequel maybe? H/Hr maybe??? pretty please???

Anyways good work. And pay no attention to flames if there are. Just enjoy.

omg omg omg omg omg

I love this story so much, i can't even tell you. When I saw that you'd updated today, i nearly squeed myself to death, and I was at work, where I need to be professional and all that. I loved--- LOVED this story. I think it was perfect--tempo, message, tone, it was all so great! I am so happy you decided to share on PK! Thank you thank you thank you thank you so much!

Well, I think it's cute. More could've been added, but it works. (I kinda wish I knew the story behind that birthday party, though...) Anyways, good job! Keep up the good work!

This is absolutely adorable!! I just read the whole thing and I love it!!! It's truly amazing and well....I love it!!!

It was wonderful and different. please please submit the next chapter.