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soccergirl
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 18/09/05
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irish_slytherin
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/08/05
htis is really really good. ilove the way the story is being told- it's a g/d fic but they information is being given by luna- fantastic. and the tone is so dark and sinister. love it
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/08/05
1. decent:

de·cent adj.

1. Characterized by conformity to recognized standards of propriety or morality.
2. Free from indelicacy; modest.
3. Meeting accepted standards; adequate: a decent salary.
4.
1. Morally upright; respectable.
2. Kind or obliging: very decent of them to lend you money.
5. Informal. Properly or modestly dressed.


2. descent:

de·scent n.

1. The act or an instance of descending.
2. A way down.
3. A downward incline or passage; a slope.
4.
1. Hereditary derivation; lineage: a person of African descent.
2. One generation of a specific lineage.
5.
1. The fact or process of coming down or being derived from a source: a paper tracing the descent of the novel from old picaresque tales.
2. Development in form or structure during transmission from an original source.
6. Law. Transference of property by inheritance.
7. A lowering or decline, as in status or level: Her career went into a rapid descent after the charges of misconduct.
8. A sudden visit or attack; an onslaught.



they're not really pronounced the same either. the 'e' in decent is long and in descent it's short... wow i sound like a teacher.

anyway, i'm not being picky - really! i just noticed b/c i was reading your summary and the word is used incorrectly... and since the summary is usually the first impression a reader will get of your story, it ought to be top-notch with no mistakes.

good work

 

monagy3
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/08/05
ok... so far it sounds good.. i want to hear the rest of the story.. hoping to hear from u soon..
 

texasgal
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/08/05
Good chapter. You're an excellent author. You've got me very interested, and I can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon.
 

PrettyPadfoot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/08/05
awwwww how adorable - hurry up with the story!!! lol please update soon!!!
 

texasgal
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/08/05
I like how you started the story with this point of view. You have a great beginning, and this sets up the rest of the story wonderfully. I can't wait to hear Luna's story, so update quickly!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/08/05
Sounds like it is going to be good. I hope you update soon...
 

irish_slytherin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/05
forgot to add to chapter alert so am reviewing again. sorry lol.
 

irish_slytherin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/05
oh im intrigued! god starting chapter- and my favourite ship too!! add another chap as soonas possible im dying to get into it. fanfic is all i have left now i have 2 years till the nesxy hp to wait.
 

Remus`sweetie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/05
Very interesting! I like this idea, but I wonder what the format's going to be...Are you going to have little flashbacks or just have her tell the story, and make it regualr chapters....did that make sense? Well anyways, I can't wait for a second chapter! Update soon! ~Kelsey
 

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