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boboza
Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 05/08/08
I just finished reading your wonderful story. No, I didn't review every chapter. I was too excited to get to the next chapter. The story was complete by the time I started reading. I have read some of your other stories and enjoyed all of them, but this is by far one of my favorites. The one major thing that I find very nice in all your stories is the fact that your spelling, grammar and punctuation are wonderful. To me, that is very important. Your plots and story development are also good. But most of all the fact that you seem to love Harry and Hermione as much as I do is the reason that I read your fics. Now I am off to read Resistance. Great work.
 

Michael
Unsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 14/03/08
Greetings!

I've been catching up on my fanfic reading and stumbled across your works. I've been reading voraciously and enjoying every minute! Granted that Harry & Hermione aren't really "canon" but I was rooting for them all the same....any your stories do them and the HP world justice.

Thanks for all of you r hard work and dedication!

Michael
 

gingercat
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/02/08
Goodness, it sure took Ron long enough to send the letter!! He should have done it right away. Not that we want Hermione with him, but he is better than the ferret.

What a Stupid Law, but it makes for a good story line!!
 

brad
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/11/07
Ah, good; Ron's proposing. Sort of obvious, even I could see that as a solution, much better than Hermione marrying the ferret anyway!
 

brad
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 22/11/07
Just reading this story now, but shucks, the solution's obvious, isn't it? Why hasn't good friend Ron leapt to Hermione's rescue with an offer of marriage?

I know this is a H/Hr story, so R/Hr wasn't to be allowed - permanently - but in this setting I feel it's a bit out of character for Ron not to at least think of the possibility. Or Harry. Or even Hermione.

Maybe that's all covered in the following chapters ...
 

kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
great story so far. this storyis going to be great.
 

JustMione
Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 23/10/07
i absolutly loved this story. some parts during it i started to laugh outloud... in class i got some of the weirdest looks but i did not care Keep up the good work. Long live HG&HP!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 23/10/07
I smell sequel...lol. We need to find out how snape and james get along, and what happens to ron, Ginny, Harry/hermione, and everyone else. It is a thought that I just threw out there...lol. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!!
 

harry_mione_love
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/10/07
No matter how many times iread this story...this scene is amazing:

Somehow this bothered Harry very badly. He stretched one arm along the back of Hermione's chair, and leaned to whisper something in her ear, making sure to maneuver into Lucius' field of vision.

Harm Hermione, and you will deal with me, was his unspoken message.

Lucius lifted his chin and one corner of his mouth twitched, as if in acknowledgment of a challenge.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 25/09/07
I wanted to like it but you just forced down obhwf down the throats of harmnoy shippers, regardless of what you say or do this shows me 1)you\'re a closet obhwf fan, 2)you really hate harry, 3) you are a complete tool.
Author Feedback: 1. No, I'm not.
2. No, I don't.
3. God, I hope not.

Is it OBHWF if neither Harry nor Hermione are married to Weasleys? Is there anything wrong with everyone liking each other and being friends at the end?

This was a stupid review, and I'm tempted to delete it, but I'll leave it here for others to observe.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 22/08/07
Very good ending. It reminds me of an X-Files fanfiction I once read. Very sweet.
 

smile_monalisa
Unsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 12/04/07
i love your story!

will you put a sequel? cuz if you did, i would love to read and review for it.
 

Superbeffie
Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 05/04/07
Nothing in my life has ever gone this right before.”




Hermione thought of the events of the day, and chuckled. “I would say that I'd hate to see what your life looks like when it's going wrong, if this is what you call going right. But I have seen it, and when your life goes wrong, it does so in a spectacular fashion!”
“Well, I won't have mediocrity!” Harry said loftily

HAAAAAA!!! That was just fantastic. And Hermione having Voldemort's love child?!?! I almost peed myself from laughing.
 

Superbeffie
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 05/04/07
WTF??? Malfoy is sooo skeezy. How the hell could Fudge actually even consider arresting Harry sodding Potter?!? Why am I still spazzing at you instead of reading the next chapter??
 

Superbeffie
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 05/04/07
Oh God... poor Ron. *sniff* You have to fix it. I can't take the sadness. Ok, if that were true I'd just go read another story, but still.
 

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