oh my gosh... this is sooo sweet... i'm swooning... really i am.. at first i thought this is going to end up in a rather angsty state especially when I read the first part of this chapter... but the ending really made me melt.. this is soooo sweet... oh my gos, i can't stop gushing(whatever that means!!!).. i liked it a lot too since i thought this is going to end with Ron and Ginny hating harry and Hermione, but it didn't.. and I am soooooooooo thankful for that.. I never wanted them broken anyway... i just soo love this story.. I really felt shattered for hermione when she poured her heart out for harry because i thought harry's going to be thick enough to make hermione feel being turned down because of his saving-people-thing.. but you know, I'm really blabbing now... but whatever!!!!! I really like the last part where they were dancing...... sooooo sweet... I wish I can find a love like that.... gosh.. *can't stop swooning*...

I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!!!!

oh boy oh boy oh boy... this is going to be very amusing.. that was a powerful chapter you have here.. wow, especially the bit where they were fighting and this part:

“Loving you so much is so bloody hard!”

I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!!

oops sorry about the double post, didnt mean to do that...

okay, reviewing to say i like it, could use formating cause single lines that are indented kinda get annoying to read but other than that its great

okay, reviewing to say i like it, could use formating cause single lines that are indented kinda get annoying to read but other than that its great

I'm glad that you had fun writing this because I had a great time reading it! Thanks so much for writing it!

and, I loved the ending. it was perfect. i'm just sorry it took him so long to realize what he was feeling. wow. that was really powerful. i'm so happy!

i also liked how you didn't completely ignore what else is going on in their lives and managed to incorporate that in too. and, i loved how Hermione recounted how she fell in love with Harry and when she realized it...and why she acted the way she did in 6th year.

:-)

a cliffie?!? you want me to review and you give me a cliffie?? that's just mean. but i'll wait and review anyway...

was Ron thinking about Luna (blue eyes and necklace?) is that what he and Hermione talked about?

and why are Harry and Hermione so mad at one another. they had all this hugging time and emotional time and now they're mad at one another?

i'm not criticizing...just frustrated with the way they are acting. i hope it all works out right in the end.

oh, and i'm so glad that Mrs. Weasley is happy for them. I didn't really think that she would be so blind as to not see the relationship between those two.

so,does Hermione get caught by Ginny when she enters the room? and did someone see them? ooh, this is getting good...

i love how you throw the pumpkin pie in, and how they feed each other, rather symbolic, really.

i love late night talks. so much come out in them. if only the stair hadn't creaked! argh! but, i suppose it will be fun to read about them watching each other from afar...

so far i like the explanations that have been set forth for who liked who and why Harry and Hermione grew apart and why she was acting that way. i still think it would be funny to find a story that told about them waking up from their trances from the love potion they were exposed to. hehe.

anyway, so far so good...

yes, Ron and Hermione on either side of Harry..just the way it should be and has always been...

phew, I am so glad that I didn't have to sit through any more Harry/Ginny! I've had enough! thank you for making their breakup before this story.

so why is Harry in such a bad and annoyed mood? and why is Hermione acting all strange around him...oh, wait, that's how she was in the last book. so, good job. i hope it doesn't stay that way, though.

i'm having fun so far...

I like it. I especially like your characterization of everyone and the reasoning behind Hermione's behaviour 6th year.

I just wanted to say I thought the story was great! I can't really see Ginny being that happy for them right away, but that's why this is fanon and not canon. Anywho, what happened to the rate this story button? Is that optional for the contest entries? Overall, one of the better stories in a while

I'm glad you had fun writing it, it really shines through!! I personatly LOVE the whole thing!! I'm a helpless romantic,(i'll admit) and this short fic had almost EVERYTHING! You did a pretty good job, thnxs for sharing it w/ us!
I haven't read any of your fics before, this is the 1st one, and I guess I'm off to read some!!
Again, completely loved it!
~Midnight~

AHHH!! LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!
Off to read next chapter!!
You're aweosme!

I honestly don't know what to say that others haven't: I LOVE IT!! The humor and conversation were really well done, and the little sensual teasing was exellent!! Can't wait to read more!!

Midnight

It might've been short, but it was pretty good!! I'm off to read next chapter, everything looks good so far!!

`Midnight~