AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 17/11/06
it was good, liked it lots, write some more please. Please
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i just wanted to say that you are doing a very nice so far. keep up the good work! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/09/05
great update it very soon as this is a great story, i love all powerful harry stories or dark harry stories but dunno any |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 31/08/05
I love your story. your's is one of the few who keep it cannon. Its a really nice twist to the whole HP series. Update soon! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/08/05
WOOOOSH I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE INTERESTING AND REALLY DARK IM NEARLY SCARED |
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This is a very good story. I liked your explanation in this chapter of James' duel with Voldemort. Spotted one mistake though. Voldemort said, "And this child is supposed to have the Power I Know Not?" How would Voldie know that?
Cool if you have an explanation, if not, ok. Just letting you know. Where has Harry been? It didn't seem like THAT much timed passed. |
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Mikes652Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 31/08/05
pretty cool story, can't wait for a update. It's an ok plot line so far but it's only chapter 2 so anything can happen. But wheres the dialoge, a story needs more speaking.
Anyway waiting for an update. |
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Why do I enjoy fics in which Harry flips out? Yes, enjoyed immensely. As I read, I could see the words in my mind, kinda like a movie. But then, I do that with all the fics I read. Makes them more fun that way, I think. Keep it up! |
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This is VERY good! You've really put quite a lot of effort and thought into this fic! I certainly hope to read some more from you very soon! |
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This is a very interesting and original way to start a fic - I sincerely like it. Moving to chapter 2! |
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Ooooh...Dark is good. I am looking forward to seeing what goes on, especially with the predictions you had in Part One.
Animagus-Steph |
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WolfNukeSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/08/05
Wow, great story so far, I'm certainly looking forward to more of this one. |
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/08/05
That was a great chapter!!
I think you've done a great job with it!
This is very interesting with the whole 'seduction by the dark'.
I can't wait to read on what happens next and what Harry did to Dudley.
I can't wait...
Take care and keep it up!!!
Sheryl |
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AliaWestSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/08/05
This was a fantastic read. I really enjoyed this concept. Can't wait for more. |
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RyusukenSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/08/05
Yep, thank you for that. The thing I like most in a dark fic is that the dark!hero has no restraints, no restrictions. And specially now, that JK killed our beloved ship in canon (whatever, I have Portkey anyway...) my favoritist to a dark!Harry gone ballistic and strait up to the Stratosphere. Harry doesnt have to follow any morals, can do whatever he wants. That is the power of darkness(love Batman too..hehehe). Anyway...its just beggining, cant wait to see him dominanting the darkness within, cause when he becomes the mater, then he will be really powerfull.
See ya as soon as you put some new chapters up! |
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