It's a good story; well written, expressive, and a good read.

But... if she truly loves him, why would she agree to marry Ron? He's a loser of the first degree. He has no redeeming features.

Maybe you clicked the wrong site, but this is an H/Hr website. Thumbs down.

omg this is so sad!!!!!

why Hermione and ron???? aww I wanted Harry and Hermione,,, I thought that besides all that , they will run away toghther..
ummm there's no happy marriage if you dont marry with love,, how they suppose to go through this if Hermione doesnt love Ron????

haha its grate,, but umm I want Harry and Hermione to be toghther

This story is so sweet and so sad that harry and hermione dont get together. It is very well written, i could imagine what was happening the whole time which is great. Hope to see a sequel!

“Dammit Hermione! We're not some characters in a book!"
okay so in this story this is the only line i laughed..actually i just snorted(but since that is too unlady like haaha..)
I was about to shout "GO HARRYMIONE!!" when i realized that I was in the verge of crying in the last part..can you believe that "CRYING!!" anyway I really loved it more power!
~Lhizza-chan

thats it? !!!! It was amazing! I loved it, kind of ripped my heart up actually. *sniff* Write more...

I thought your story was great. I loved it. It is the first fanfiction story that I have read and I can't wait to see if there are going to be any continuations. I loved the fact that you incorporated lyrics from Kelly Clarkson into the story. They fit perfectly with the direction you have taken the characters. Great story! Totally loved it!

no no no no no NO NO NO!!!!! IT's harry & hermione forever!!!!! rowling better make it that.

Wheres the promised sequel chapter?! Dont end it here! It was good and all but portkey rules means you put Hermione with Harry! AAAAHHHHHHH!!!!

Lovely fic. My fave part was when he mouthed "I love you." to her. I got chills just reading it. Very sweet. Great job.

~Cat

i hope you'll be going on a long drive again soon. doesn't look like you've written in awhile so i hope that your writing spirits come up again!

i really like this fic - its so sad how time marches on is but i'll just revel in the fact that something does come out of it - even if it was such a small time.

i don't think i've given anything away right?
sorry if i do.
melissa
acoustics1220

I always find this one thing wrong with stories like this, it doesn't seem right that Harry loves someone who loves him back, yet he is willing to put aside her happiness, not to mention his, to spare his best friends feelings.

IM CRYING!that was so sad very well written and very realistic .In other words I LOVED IT!

I hate it! It was horrid. Are you a Harry/Hermione shipper?

i have to say that i do like this one. no screaming or shouting or broken promises at the last moment.