Wow..
poor Hermione...
I feel realyl bad for her. good luck in the competition! this is gunna get good... i can read it in your writing!
cannot wait to read more!

I only found this today, reading through some of my old reviews and finding that this story ahd been updated since my last reading. Interesting way to bring Harry there. Or at least, in Hermione's mind, have Harry there. As soon as I reached the last line, I went searching for the poem. Very nice tie-in. Another great job.

hermione would be the only one to notice something like that.

well this is depressing! and possibly the only way i'd ever be able to handle ron and hermione being together without wanting to yell "THIS IS WRONG!!!!!!!"

I liked it. I hope this turns out for the best cause it hurts to read about hermione in this state

oooh i likey very cool are u making more chapters cuz that is a great story

oh please update soon! this story is so smart! hurry please dont make me beg!
Callie

The story is turning out great, hurry up and update, please.

I hope you update soon! I'm rather enjoying this story. It's one of those dilema's isn't it? You just want to hate Ginny for taking Harry, but sometimes (like in this story) you just can't because it's a natural thing. Of course, you want to throttle both Harry and Ginny for not having any more sense to see that Hermione is obviously the best one for him lol. But you write Hermione very very well, I really felt what she was feeling, and I rarely am able to get such a feeling from a fic.

Incredibly sad, but incredibly good. Wow, I like this, and I do hope taht you give Hermione a happy ending! I like the wording here, it feels wordy, but it's not. It's written just right for a sad beginning like this.

I like this story... is a good line of reasoning for Jo Rowling's obvious loss of sanity for putting Harry and Ginny together

Oh wow. I love this chapter. Hermione is a little bit sappy with the whole Harry thing, and I understand she's in love with him, but she IS a bit of a sad-sap. I love your whole feather/Emily Dickenson thing though. It's sweet.

Oh...
That was really good !! I was crying over it. Love the lines in the end of both chapters. keep on with it !!

very bittersweet at the end there. I'm looking forward to how this one will pan out. I wouldn't have thought Hermione and Ron would allow Harry to go off on his own, no matter what he thought about it.

I can't wait for more! This story is very interesting so far, and I love your take on Hermione's behavior in HBP. Update soon!