AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 05/10/06
here's every belated comment that i may/may not have sent you, all crammed into one sentence because i have to go see a play with my boyfriend...
if i had a boyfriend who wrote love poems as well as you wrote fics, i'd be a very happy person. unfortunately, not everyone has such talent and amazing writing ability as you. in reguards to your story, i like how it's got lily and her friends and james and his, and how everything works out with the carpets and thestrals and how alice is in the story. it makes my heart get all warm and fuzzy since people haven't ALL forgotten her.
so, high fives for a job well done.
xoxo tessa |
Author Feedback: awww thank you so much.
i can't believe i forgot about fanfiction.
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even though my finals are coming up...but during winter break i'll most definitely update. if i don't, shoot me. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 31/05/06
it was long enough. i love James in every fanfuc i read, including this one. Jade's father is a little bit annoying, but that was kind of predictable because she's like the main character. well, i'll be waiting for the next chapter... |
Author Feedback: well i wanted to get some more lily/james into the story so i had to get rid of her. hahahaha
and jade isn't my name. trying to clear that up because *some people* think that most authors put in a made-up character with THEIR NAME. jade isn't like me at all besides her looks and nationality. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 22/05/06
so you are not going to update this one again? oh, please, update it. i like it's plot. i like the story and how it is going except for the fact that everything is around Jade & Sirius and I preffer Lily & James, but that's what makes it better for me.
if you can, please update another chapters. you said you had a lot of ideas and you planned it to be long. i write fanfictions too, but i don't publish them yet, because i haven't write more than a chapter on each.
when you find it possible, can you post another chapter?   |
Author Feedback: you see...there are times when i have this BRILLIANT writing inspiration. then, i write a good, meaningful chapter.
but...unfortunately, it hasn't been like that. the last month of school has been crazy, there are only 2 and a half more days left so hang in there.
after school is over, i'll probably update.
i might even write a chapter right now...i think i started one. we'll see.
i hope you have a fabulous summer! i'm deciding to center it more on Lily and James now...it'll have to. you'll see why. *evil cackle*
--your queen-- |
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Well that's good. I like this story! Awesome job! Let me guess, the reason you won't update is because you have a lot of schoolwork or something along those lines? Oh well same here, sometimes I have so much schoolwork I don't have time to read these great fanfics, I wish I did. Just update again whenever you can. 
xoxoLuna |
Author Feedback: haha, great fanfiction? this? *gags* i don't think so.
then again, you were right about the schoolwork.
but, i'm updating soon! HOORAY!
--your queen-- |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/06
Cool. This is a good story. Pretty well-written. I like it. |
Author Feedback: i don't think it's well written.
i need to get some new vocabulary words...yeah. my writing has improved.
english is still my best subject.
am i blabbering? yeah, i'm blabbering.
now i'm talking to myself and answering my own questions.
i think it's best if i just stop typing.
--bow down to your queen-- |
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DDwellingUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/06
Gotcha, Madhu.
:-P
I'm bored.
So i went here.
And now i bid you a grand farewell.
May your dreams be plagued with disturbing images of Dumbledore/McGonagall.
-laughing-
P.S. I've gotten hooked onto LotR |
Author Feedback: be patient! don't click twice on submit!
gee, no criticism? doesn't sound like you... |
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DDwellingUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/06
Gotcha, Madhu.
:-P
I'm bored.
So i went here.
And now i bid you a grand farewell.
May your dreams be plagued with disturbing images of Dumbledore/McGonagall.
-laughing-
P.S. I've gotten hooked onto LotR |
Author Feedback: gggggggggaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
gross.
sorry i'm replying to late....like four months late. jk jk jk.
i've decided to update!!
my mouse is so weird...even if i'm not touching it, it moves diagonally across the screen.
-.-
ghost mouse.
--bow down to your queen-- |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 14/01/06
*ahem* a little like the old you? No offense, but you havent updated since forever. PLEASE do it soon? okay? because i would really appreciate knowing what was wrong with Lily. And all those other students. I love this fic, by the way. thats probly why i'm pleading you to PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! I would hate to forget all about this fic (even though it would show up on the new/updated page when- i mean if you ever update)!!!! |
Author Feedback: oh, don't worry. i'll update.
i have plans now...and i know what'll be happening in the next chapter.
all i'll say is that lily and james will be magnified upon.
--your queen-- |
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VickieUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/12/05
I do like your story, but i hhope i dont sound mean, ebcause im not trying to, i think youre giving jade all the good qualities, like the metamorphaging, helping find a cure and all that and not paying enough attention to lily 
but thats probably because i love james and lily.
nice story. still =) |
Author Feedback: don't worry, something will happen soon...you'll be so happy when it does. i don't think i'll be happy. i always love lily and james, but my favorite character in this story is jade...but, for the sake of the story, this must happen. she was helping find a cure just because, it's not really a power, she's just really smart. lily hasn't BLOSSOMED yet, what do you expect?? she's practically a muggle.  i love your consideration, though. thank you.  |
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Yay, thank you. This chapter is short, but it's okay, don't worry. I'm sure you'll find time now that the winter vacation is starting soon or already started for some people. Just update when you can! |
Author Feedback: mine's already started...7 days ago...now i feel bad. i dedicate ALL my time to harry potter and graphics/HTML/comp stuff, and 1/4 of the harry potter time is dedicated to fanfiction...then i have projects to work on. and i have to update my other story! i deleted a BUNCH of my stories, one that was uber popular.  but i hated them and i just deleted them. without warning. sorry if i don't update. i promise to have a chapter up next week. i return from Austin on sunday and leave on friday. today is thursday..i'm working on it.  |
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FireEyes7Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 09/12/05
I like it! It is really good so far. I can't wait to read more of it! |
Author Feedback: thank you for your review. reviews are always great. i expect more after 6 chapters, but whatever. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/05
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Author Feedback: vivian..i'm not a liar. i already explained the whole story. *sigh* when will you learn?  |
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Aww, how sweet, James helping Lily. I love it! I saw HP4 on Saturday(the 19th). Please update soon! |
Author Feedback: haha. yeah, they are supposed to be sweet. but, in this story, there will be many twists and changes to the plot...it's just like pizza dough.
the plot is just like pizza dough..wow i'm creative today
-kal ho naa ho |
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love the new chapter
arnt lily and james so sweet and sirius is just a big flirt
are u continueing the story? |
Author Feedback: yes, i am definitely continuing this story.
you have the whole point, except lily doesn't like james, remember?*wink*
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i really liked it but i dont get it how lily went from blushing in James presence to hating him. There has to be more behind it rli. |
Author Feedback: well, you see, it explains after it says she hates him. the months had gone by adn he slowly started becoming very sure of himself. and...you know...arrogant. it does explain when they are playing quidditch  |
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