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a muggle named Caity
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/05
Shanny, it's Caity, nice first chapter. It has a good plotline. But, if you want constructive criticism, here it is: you should check over your grammer and spelling, you have a few mistakes. Anyway, I hope that helped!

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Caity
Author Feedback: Hey,

Thanks for reading my story caity, and thanks for the advice i'll check. I will try to make my second chapter better

Thanks
 

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