katieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/05
ok fist of all, i really liked it. i think its a great story!!! your an amazing writer, I cant wait to read whats next!!! keep on writing.
your really good. great job shannon!!!  |
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Thank you for the support I had fun so far writing it. I have two more chapters, my fifth chapter should be in by tonight, tomorrow, or monday. This is what you say the most actionis chapter, the 6th and last chapter will be i can't tell you or it will spoil it. Thanks!!! And please read some of my others. Locked, A Special Spell is kind of boring, though you can still read it. Also please read some of my sisters storys like, Nine Long Months, that obe is very, very good, also Caught Readheaded, and Someones watching over me. I reccomend lots of these stories. It is just my sister Caity is also a very good author, i really mean it!!! Thanks!!!
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this is a really good story. i love fan fictions when harry and hermione are married it's just so...harmonious.  |
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Thanks, i am glad you so far like it. The latest the next chapter will be in is by Sunday. Thanks!!! 
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Sofar, so good. i like it so far and are glad i am reading this, update soon |
Author Feedback: Thank you caity |
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MioneUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/08/05
That was a great post,i wonder how Harry is going to react when he finds out that he is going to be a dad,anyway keep posting and you are doing a great job with this ffc |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I am glad you iked it, but my next chapter will be in Saturday, i know it seems maybe allittle long but this is a important chapter.
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HPfanSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/08/05
nice chap!
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Author Feedback: Thanks! My next chapter might not be in for a while, because if you don't want this spoiled don't read this part. (It is the final battle of Voldemort and Harry)
It might not be in for a week, but i will have it in by Saturday!!! Okay?
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PattyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/08/05
Great post,i love this story and you are doing a great job with this ffc,please post more when you can  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/08/05
The plot seems good, but there seem to be a lot of run on sentences. Maybe take a look at that so ther aren't so many in the next chapter. Other than that, very good story!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the advice i will make sure to look at that, thanks for reading, my next chapter should be in sometime soon. By this tuesday, Thanks!!!
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man, harry was deep!
NOT!
i think that harry upset hermione when he said "two weeks, not four"
you need to get a beta for the grammer and punctualization
don't look at me! |
Author Feedback: Well thanks for reading, i'll try my best to do better for my next chapter. BYE!  |
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I'm loving the story so far!It's wonderful!I hope you post next chapter soon! |
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PattyUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/08/05
Great post,this was really good,sweet and a little sad too,keep the good work and post more soon This ffc is really good |
Author Feedback: Hello,
Thanks for reading, i will post my new chapter after i get 8 reviews it shouldn't take too long. Thanks!!! |
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MarrianeUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/08/05
Great this chapter is even better then the last keep it up. Nice fic h/hr all the way. |
Author Feedback: Hello,
Thanks for reading my new chapter will be up after 2 more reviews, i need 8. Thanks!!! |
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MarrianeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/05
A vert great fic, I would gladly read the next few chapters. |
Author Feedback: Hey,
Thanks for reading, yes please read the next few chapters. And my next chapter will come up after 8 reviews, so i only need two more. Thanks!!! |
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PattyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/05
Great start,i wonder how she is going to react when he tell her that he have to leave,please post more soon |
Author Feedback: Hi,
Thanks for reading, i am glad you like it so far
Also you will find out soon how Hermione acts.I hope you will like my next chapter. If you do send me a review after you read it. Thanks!!! |
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Ok, this is very good I can't wait till you update Please update soon !!!! The story is really good and I will be checking for updates.
~Hermione Jane Potter~ |
Author Feedback: Hi,
Thanks for reading my story i'm glad you like it so far, my next chapter should be in soon, so should be Locked. Thanks
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