loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/08
LOL  I love Harry's silliness and Hermione's sternness with him.  Had me giggling the whole time. 
Ron/Luna naughtiness is just what I need right now. I love your Ron/Luna story!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/07
Yes, of course, it was a suggestion and its up to you really. Buddy? XD anyway, I mean, a brief contains content of a sexual nature would be nice in the summary. ^_^ thanks for taking the time to reply, by the way. |
Author Feedback: I guess you're right. Next time I'll add 'adult themes' or something to the summary then.
Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/07
Eh... You should up the rating or at least give a warning! I was expecting snogs at the most. Eeug. |
Author Feedback: It's PG-13... I think that's a high enough rating. I didn't get into the specifics of what Ron was doing with Luna - I just bluntly pointed out that he was having sex with her. That's not R material, buddy... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/11/05
LOVE IT, PLEASE GIVE MORE OF A SHOW NEXT TIME.
P.S. MAKE IT BETWEEN HARRY AND HERMIONE, AND HOW HERMIONE FEELS UNCOMFORTABLE. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked the story.  And thanks for reviewing.
I don't know about that... Sadly, I've kind of fallen out of interest with writing HP fanfiction. I'm really into writing POTC fanfiction at the moment. Maybe one day, if my interest in writing HP fanfiction returns, I'll write that story for you. Just keep a weathered eye on the horizon.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/11/05
Hee. I enjoyed your story very much. Your "attempt at humor" went very well. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I honestly don't think it was a good story - I wrote it when I was 14, and when I was a very inexperienced writer - but, if you liked it, then that's good.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/09/05
Hehehe..that was very cute. I really liked that. Great job!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
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NatiFcs28Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/09/05
“You won’t let me knock you up until we’re married, so I have to take refuge elsewhere.”
^^^ROFLMAO. i loved that. but yeah, isn't knocking someone up getting them pregnant? i think he just wants somewhere to stick himself (sorry for the crudeness)
otherwise, very cute! i thought it was more of a harry/hermione, but that's fine, because i'm not such a great fan of ron/luna ffs. But it's adorable! lol.
-Nati |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I loved that part as well. And yes, to knock someone up means to get them pregnant, but yes, Harry was just so very eager and upset that he had to wait, that he resorted to crudeness, lol.
Well, it had more H/Hr in it, but it was based on Ron sneaking off to go see Luna, so thats why I made it a R/LL story.
Thanks for your nice review!
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CalleyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/05
yeah well i can honestly say that your better than your sister at writing |
Author Feedback: That's only because I'm in high school and have gone through many english classes. However, she is still in elementary school and has never had nor been in an english class before. So, for someone her age, I think she's doing a pretty darn good job. I read your review for her story, and all I have to say is, if you don't have anything nice to say, then hell, don't say anything at all!
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Not bad, Not bad at all. Considering I don't like one shots That is just about the highest praise I can give you. Not bad at all. I actually rather enjoyed it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you, i enjoyed writing it!! |
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Aww that was so cute I loved it hope you make more stories you are a very good writer!!!!
~Hemrione Jane Potter~ |
Author Feedback: Thank you!! That really means a lot!! I actually have a few more stories. I'm posting my third one tomorrow and then the other two or three (I forgot how many, lol.) I'm posting later. But they are all one-shots so I can completely focus on Nine Long Months. |
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Hahaha, this was actually pretty good. You could have thought something better then um um for Ron when Harry was questioning. But other then that, this not-beta story was pretty good. |
Author Feedback: Thanks!! i didn't really know what to have Ron say, I was just trying to illustrate the fact that Ron was embarassed and nervous. I'm glad you liked it though!! |
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