wow. way to kill a possible relationship, ginny. i mean with adrien. not that i'm feeling all that bad about that, anyway, because it's gotta be draco and ginny (i mean, really now! lol). but even so, she might at least one to have *one* friend in the... lion's den? snake's... nest? whatever.
of course, there IS hermione's boss roldwin to get her out or be friendly or whatever, but still...
i almost laughed when malfoy and ginny were talking. not because of the topic of conversation, obviously, but because there was that one time where he finished her sentence. probably not the EXACT words she had to say, but close enough 
ah, the first of many d/g moments. i'm such a sap LOL (note I said FIRST. meaning that there'd better be more after this!  )
and i thought the end was sweet. that is, draco wanting to not add to any stress or anything for his mother, not the fact that he was "him" again (although there is the bowed head so... um, sorry, been out for the summer a little too long, i'm trying to analyze stuff. oops?  )
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ColieM13Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/05/08
This story is leaving me on the edge. I like it and hope you update soon.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/05/08
Awesome chapter. I really glad that we got some D/G action in this one. It will be interesting to see how these two get together in the end.
Please update soon.
Aly |
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moogleSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/05/08
I really loved this chapter. I am so glad you are taking this slowly as well! Realism is something I need in a fic, and you capture that balance between interacting nicely, not giving too much too soon, but not holding out either.
It was good to see into Draco's past a bit more and get a hand on what had happened. I also liked that you had Ginny deal with Adrian, though I have a feeling that won't be the last of him.
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I would think that even draco would be able to tell who "let her in there" as, from what I can tell, she was on his cousin's arm. sheesh. blind much, malfoy? lol
not only that but he's taken to swearing at an event, and one being hosted in his honor no less. talk about hospitable 
and here's hoping that harry will get a grip (sooner rather than later, like ginny advised) and talk to hermione. or something... actions speak louder than words, I guess, and sometimes harry IS known to get a little tongue-tied
ron and luna expecting... already. WOW. I actually HADN'T expected that one, go figure  you know, when ginny(?) mentioned harry catching ron intending to buy baby toys it occurred to me that ron is the most likely to flip out and buy a bunch of baby stuff. hermione, despite being female (and quite possibly a sap for kids) is more practical and harry, even though he only had dudley's hand-me-downs and whatnot, probably wouldn't want to overload his kids with stuff (see: becoming dudley. urgh).
I'm definitely curious about how this next chapter will go. not just for ginny but also harry and hermione and... I think ron and luna are doing pretty well on their own. now fred and angelina... hope fred clears *that* one up soon... (go ginny for starting things. woo! lol)
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moogleSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/05/08
Awesome!! I loved this, and if my fingers weren't so freakin numb I'd write much longer review, but as it is, every stupid letter I have to backtrack to fix a mistake.
Anyway, this was a great chapter, and thanks for the heads up in letting me know chapter 4's end had changed. I would have been a bit confused otherwise, lol.
Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! |
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Dun dun dun lol nice chapter! i really liked it! hope you can update soon  |
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I have just read all five chapters, so please forgive me for just leaving one review. This has been a great story so far - the plot is interesting and the peripheral characters are as well. A smart and sassy Ginny is always great to read, especially if she is paired with someone other than Harry (Harmony forever!)and even better if she paired with Malfoy. I am hoping that this Malfoy is just misunderstood and will be redeemed eventually. Thanks for a little hint of some Harmony, as well. Can't wait to read more of this story, so I urge you to please, please update soon! Excellent job! |
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great story hope you update this alot sooner than you used to. |
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Awesome story! i really love it!! it has some mistery in it it's really really good!! hope you can update soon!!! |
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Just found this story, and I love it!!! You are a very good writer, I must say. Can't wait for more! |
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Sounds like something interesting is about to happen. I can't wait to read more! |
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moogleSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/04/08
Woo, this is getting exciting, and I managed to catch up witout fallign asleep, though I think, my typing may be suyffering. I don't want to re-read ewhat I am writing thyough, so sorry if it makes no sense at all.
I really liked this chapter, and I think you are doing a wonderful job with making it all flow together nicely. I simply cannot wait to see what happens next, and I wish you all the luck with inspiration!!
I realise now why I had not read this story, because it had not been updated, lol. I'm very glad you managed to update now and give me this awesome chance to read it. I won't beg you to update soon, because as a writer myself I know how incredbly tough that can be when inspiration is not being nice. Instead, I shall wish you luck, and I hope the characters play nice for you  |
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moogleSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/04/08
OOooo, I kind of suspected this to happen, and am pleased to say I was right. Though it wasn't really that subtle, but meh, I like to think I am intelligent for guessing anyway, heee hee.
You have a wonderful way wiht words. I find myself completely caught up in this fic, just wanting to keep reading and reading! I love it, and I am definitly adding this to my favourites!! |
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moogleSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/04/08
Ooooh, I smell a mystery. What could have possibly happened? I am all agog to know, and am too addicted to wait till tomorrow when I will be more coherent, lol.
I love this chapter, and I love this story!!! |
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