Okay wow, this story made me finally register with Portkey so I can review in addition to anonymously obsessing over stories. It... is... amazing!! (And I am an EXTREMELY tough critic.) Your writing flows so smoothly and effortlessly, it almost seems like it could be canon. Great, great, GREAT job!!! Soo, so good... Ok I can't stop...

defintly funny. good job. keep up the writting long enough to be enjoyabe too!

This is an extremely funny f/f.Wow!!!!!!!!! I was at a meeting reading this on my mp3 player and i was laughing my head off. I wish this much humor was in the HBP!

Wow, you realy left us imagining on some parts. Especially the part about the Locker room incident.We can all wonder Hermione's angry and uh wild side is really like. It would be really good of you to tell us what really happened in there like a secret secret diary or something? I also think you should say how big the uh Model HP is or otherwise "Little Harry". Thanks!

That was really inventive!! Great of yours I have to say. I love it.
Cheers!

This is by far one of the funniest things I've read. I love the idea of HBP from Harry's POV. That conversation about Draco's size was quite humorous. And Ginny The Slut was ... so funny. Ron, dear Won-Won what ever shal we do with him?

You did an awesome job. I really like your style of writing. Keep the stories coming! Er ... please?

This story was absolutely, positively, freaking bloody brilliant. I can't even begin to list everything that is wonderful about this story. Great concept/plot, well written, entertaining, funny, sad, and everything in between.A sequel would be interesting, but that is purely your decision. Great job. Keep up the wonderful work.Oh, did I forget to mention, yes I'm delusional and proud of it.

This story was hilarious!!! Please Please, write a sequal to this. maybe about the final battle. we all need a little humor in our lives.

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This was very interesting. Very well written though, and very different. Keep up the fantastic writing!

I don't think I liked the combination of angst and humor. This story reminded me a lot of those I wanted to forget about book six. I liked your other stories better. Those were good. Maybe you could write some sort of sequel to this saying that R/Hr never actually materialized except for one disastrous date in the summer.


I also think that you don't need to write some sort of sex scene in every story. I like reading them but they are not necessary for a good story.

Hope you write more Humor and fluff fics.

I have just found this story and I absolutely love it!
I really liked the idea of Harry giving Hermione a massage to ease her cramps...
Are you going to write a sequel, maybe involving Hermione and the original "Model HP"? After all she won't have to buy a third one, when she can have the real thing...

Thanks for writing!

LMAO!

As Green_Eye_Sparkle16 continued to laugh in uncontrolable volumes, she decided that this was one of the funniest stories she had ever read.

"Hmm," she wondered aloud. "I wonder what other kind of stories this author has posted. I have to read them."

Before Green_Eye_Sparkle16 could go on to read other stories written by "uvagirl", she first had to review the story mark it as a "favorite".

"Hmm," she thought. "What could I possibly say to get the author to understand how much I was laughing?" She sat in silence for a moment and came to the conclusion that there simply were no words...just loud laughs echoing through the still house.

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Seriously, you did a wonderful job with this! I really enjoyed the humor, and it was so well written! Thank you for an amazing read...I'll be reading more of your work!

Have a great day,
Sara

Wow! This story was awesome. I love stories where the charcters are just so open about everything. This was a truly amazing fic about Harry's point of view on the HBP. Can't wait to read even more of your stories.

This chapter was far better that the first. i was amazed with your talent to make a reader laugh, cry, and "awww!" all in one chapter. i adore your writing style and use of colorful adjectives. i hope you continue to write, because you really have tremendous skill. i really enjoyed it.

This was just plain, laugh out loud, hilarious. It was completely lacking in reverence and prudence, which was probably why I enjoyed reading it so much. I've so taken a pleasure to reading these "HBP Reviews by a Character". This is the third one, but every single one of the versions have been well written, fresh and unique. Yours, by far, is the funniest AND most creative. ::wink, wink:: Thank you so much for the laughter.