Hehe nutrition food market as the equivalent of Guy Hell You sick sick person,my eyes are watering for the containers of marshmallow cream and colored cake icing that people will never see.

I'm just kidding ...awesome story "Thus began the great pasta war"..hehe classic.

Awww,Hermione did all that and Zachary was living out every straight hormone-driven teenage guys fantasy about being in bed with twins dressed like an angel and a devil.

Parvati...Padma....how could you do that to Hermione!!!

Umm... ..hehe*clears throat*...sorry about that,when I read what was going on my mind played out the Patil twins from the movies.

I really wouldn't want to be Zack the next time he runs into the trio.

Yeah this is a good story so far but Im sorry i couldnt see Harry singing that and Hermione barely but i think the songs are good but i cant see them singing those songs.

Proud?
I hope so...
That was very good! Great! Good work
I also really loved the part were Ron though about the furniture! well, well. Great work! hhr forever

OMG.
Actually, That was like the only thing I was able to say, but I'll say this ti then; Loved the dress... have always loved the song... doesn't matter you borrow things from movies, because it is very great anyways and... again; OMG (Witch is to the rest of the chapter. gulp.)
HHr forever!

Oh...
this is going to be interesting. It was so beautiful written and I felt a bit heartbroken. But it was lovely and wonderul!

Awww!
I loved when Harry's mind realized what he'd just though. I wonder what will happend in the morning... if you'll write abou' that... probably not, but I can always imagen!

Aww, it was so very beautiful written!
The indian girls Zachary (that asshole) was with made me think of Parvati and Padme... I can't help it, it just came up!
well. I loved the first chapter, and I love the song. and Mione's dress.
I'll just keep on reading

Rons final line is a killer! this is a nice story but i REALLY think harry should of got Zach back

Of course Hermione would come up with plans. I think that's hilarous. Great job. Too bad they didn't say they loved each other at first, to spare all the hurt. Great job.

How very sweet. If I am right...one of those quotes was taken from the newest Peter Pan movie I think "Always is an awfully long time," but I'm not sure. Well, that was very cute.

I am reading this over at POrtkey instead of ff.netl Great job btw! I loved the way you had it set up for Hermione and Zach, maybe H/Hr will use it

Oh my! That was really, absolutely, amazingly, CUTE!! Great job! I LOVE how it all ended, Ron is so funny! Great job! Good luck on your future stories!!!

Ooooh..1 This was so cute..! Always loved the idea of Harry and Hermione singing to each other! And I just LOVE Only Hope..! Great choice..!

And Im totally picturing The Trio singing Aint no Mountain High... *giggle* priceless..!
Well done!!

Really good story!! can't see anything wrong with it!! you just need to pick up the pace a little bit i think!! no offense ot you writing skills at all!!!

Really good story!! can't see anything wrong with it!! you just need to pick up the pace a little bit i think!! no offense ot you writing skills at all!!!