AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/06/08
Now that was good writing! I quite liked it in an odd way. It was a fic with a sense of humour yet it wasn't intelectually challenged, like a lot of ‘adult-romancelet' fics are. Good job! |
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I liked it, I especially like the part where Harry slapped down Mrs. Weasley, she's always struck me as a nosy bint who pushed the R/Hr and H/G relationships, and it pisses me off.
I would have preferred Hermione getting as much pleasure from their first time as Harry did, I don't like the stories where he's the only one who does. Other than that, it was great. |
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MaggieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/07
I read this story with my girlfriend, we both loved it! She loves Hermione and Ron, but I know differently, Hermione and Harry BELONG together. They\'re on par with Romeo and Juliet, Tristian and Isolde, Brad and Jennifer. Though I\'m usually a little shy when it comes to the smut, my gf convinced me to try it. I was surprised at how tender and sweet you made even the dirty parts! Well done! As a gateway to fanfic this was perfect  I look forward to reading more of your stories, keep up the good work! Actually, for Christmas I\'d love to write my gf a story of my own, if you have any suggestions for a first time writer I\'d love to hear them
 Maggie |
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lauhallSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/10/07
That was good, really good, you did a pretty good job showing H/G and H/R fans the way we feel. Congrats for the amazing story. |
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GracielaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/07
awwwwwwww
I love this story!.
Especially the way you are writing it! congrats for your wonderful job! keep going! |
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Yeah, I agree with you (about Molly, that us).  Hey, but at one point I thought she was a Harmonian! Ah well, at least Lord Voldemort is on our side. That has GOT to count for something.  Anyway, good job!  Though again, I agree with you, there should have been more smut, tee hee.. |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
Best Line:
“After all, anyone who thinks we weren’t meant to be together is clearly... delusional.”
 So true, so true. |
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jadziaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/07
this pice was great... i  everything that has to do with h/hr and positively hate r/hr and h/g shippers... i always say that mrs. weasley wants harry and gin together and ron and herms, but that just doesn't feel right... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/06/07
I absolutely loved the you twisted jk's intreview when h/hr shippers were called delusional. |
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Nimbus02Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/07
Dude, I totally sypmthasize with you! Who the heck can see Rona dn Hermione together? I mean Ron is selfish and always thinking about himself, and Hermione is not selfish and thinks about everyone else. So it's like what the heck. People are cleary Delusional! |
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Thank you for writing this. Reading through the Harry Potter series, I've always seen that Harry and Hermione are so meant to be. R/H and H/G just don't make any goddamn sense at all. And if JK Rowling doesn't let HHr happen in the last book, I'll just say "You suck, Rowling!" and keep on sailing on my HHr ship!  |
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Oh em gee, I absolutely adore this story. So cute, and you got the characters' portrayed perfectly. Keep up the amazing work!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/07
very cute!
love the whole patio thing
cant wait to read more!!!
harry telling off molly like that was pretty funny
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The ending explained the title and that was brilliant, as the rest was too. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/07
Lovely fic! I especially love “After all, anyone who thinks we weren’t meant to be together is clearly...delusional.”
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