InkJetSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
This is interesting and has a lot of potential. I think you should keep going. |
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well, I like it, and think you should continue...maybe give us some flashbacks...I admit I was a bit suprised when he said she was pregnant, but i guess this will make Harry's revenge on malfoy even sweeter.
good job! |
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KcluvsMlUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
The last couple of paragraphs were funny. El papa, mon pere...so funny. I would like to read more! |
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Honestly, I'm not really that interested. I don't know what it is exactly, I can't really put my finger on it. I mean, the writing is good, bad malfoy is always good (possibly the only good thing in HBP, besides a few seconds of H/Hr fluff) and the plot itself is..okay. But, I dunno, it feels like you have more...potential. You could write a better story than this one... |
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Hi!!
yes, Yes, YEs, YES!!! PLEASE do more!! I didn't know how interested I was, but then you added the part where Hermione is pregnant, and I know it sounds corny, but I LOVE those kind of stories (don't ask why, lol.), and now I'm hooked!! So PLEASE continue on with the story. I think it has a really nice plot developing in it!
Good Luck and PLEASE update it, I'm dying to find out what happens next!
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Caity
PS: Kill Draco, i really don't care. I only like him in stories when he's hooked up with Ginny. |
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KathyBugUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
i LOVE it!!! this is seriously a awesome story!!! im hooked!!! i loved the twist about hermione being pregnant!!! didn't see that one coming, update soon!!!! |
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KEEP IT UP DARN IT ....i will be extremely mad if u dont lol
a daddy ...el papa....mon pere ^_^ that was awesome |
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Hmm, I like the direction this is going and looking forward to updates. Is this a 7th year fic? And I'm assuming that it was written pre-HBP, so will the release of HBP affect the fic at all? Looking forward to the next chapter! |
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S.K.Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
I say continue on with the story. It truly seems to be an excellent story!
S.K. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
Keep going with this, definitely! I gotta know what happens next with the baby Potter/Granger and the recovery too. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
Wow!!! That was a great start please continue. I want to see Hermione and baby Potter make a full recovery. Update soon and keep up the great work!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
Yes please do continue with this. It has a very promising start. |
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Well it certainly is an interesting piece, I'd be curious to read more. |
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