jajaja i love the hole I will not be a friend with benefits.”
His eyes shimmered with amusement. “I don’t expect you to be.”
“Are you saying that you want me to be you’re girlfriend?”
“Okay,” she shrugged grinning evilly as she suddenly flipped him over. “Lets go again!”

ahhh thats is so jajajajajja just cause he ask her to be her guirldfrind he gets a treat lol

Ahh, a good job of converting it. Many fictions are hard to convert, but you've done well. I like it.

Yes i agree that is one of the hottest sex scenes i have read

HOT HOT HOT!!! Damn girl you are good!! That was realllllly good!!

Great! Are there coming more ? I think I need to read more...

Look dude Im a big fan of all you H/Hr fics ok but why the hell arent you updating this one yet?! Love ya!

It was great, and I wouldn't even have known that there was a switch, until:

"Her eyes widened, her fingers clenched the black silk sheet, and her mouth dropped open. “Oh,” she grunted, “wow.” Her breath was coming out in hiccupping pants, her toes mimicking her hands and curling into the sheet."

Black silk sheets after studying? That seems so, dare I say, Draco?

I read this version of the story once before though without reading the note that explained the word change and didn't notice it. I think it just jumped out at me the second time.

I liked that the story started once the line had been crossed, having already ended up here, it was a nice change from the getting there stories.

That said, I'd love to see you do another H/H where the story starts without having touched other yet, but having crossed a different sort of line, not spoken or anything but in their minds. Just a thought.

Anyway, me likes.

one of the best. it definatelly had my heart pumping. write more!

That was freakin' fantastic! That was some kick ass smut I must say.... I loved, loved, loved it... I loved the fic and the way in which you potrayed Harry and Hermione....excellent

I liked both versions but I liked it as D/G better. I don't know, it fit better that way, but it was good this way too.

harry was being a tad bit rude when he just "thurst" and hermione just wasnt ready

Wow. That was... well... I havent seen good SWS in a LONG time. SO GOOD.

I like the emding to this story. It is funny. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Please wirte more soon.

AMAZING . Fantastic I loved it! Sequel...sequel...sequel..Haha that was an awesome ending. Did I mention a sequel?

I liked this one too! Now if only Harry and Hermione would get together in the books. *sigh* I may just have to live them through you. Which is fine by me. Keep Writing!