CHARLIE! I understand why, but no way. I was reading this in class and I gasped so loud everyone around me turned to look at me. (I'm in a class of 125 people) Ok I'm going to the next chapter. Oh I Loved the Percy action.

CHARLIE! I understand why, but no way. I was reading this in class and I gasped so loud everyone around me turned to look at me. (I'm in a class of 125 people) Ok I'm going to the next chapter. Oh I Loved the Percy action.

i almost cried when harry was talking to his parents... i didn't feel that way with dh ya know crying when he was at the grave yard good work and keep it up

First let me say that I really enjoy your writing. I have to say that I totally agree with your assesment of Ron. and as for JKR, well she must have some odd ideas about love, Ron's treatment is the sort of thing seen in primary school kids 'I tease you cause I like you' which obviously for our three heroes would be totally wrong. Two of them would be well out of that stage.

yeah, the letter didn't really sound like harry. but harry is an icon. he is that symbol of hope, and so i think a statement from him of some sort is really necessary during a time of war. it moves him from a reluctant hero to someone doing more than his share for the war. i'd love to read the rest of this story. big yay from me.

I love this story. Can't wait to see what comes next. Please update this story as soon as possible.

Thank You!

QUITE GOOD ACTUALLY GO ON AND WRITE IT FAST I CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE HURRY UP

amazing chapter
and story
it took me a few hours but it was worth it
can't wait for the next chapter
update soon

Oooh amazing job! I love your characterizations and your interpretations of the events that occured in the catastrof*ck that was HBP. Well done! I can't wait for more!

Great story, and could find nothing to critisize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon.

Ahhh! It was *not* a good idea to read the LJ post at work

First though, I enjoyed this chapter. I'm happy Hermione is still willing to let her opinions known and she doesn't become docile because they're more than friends, it's why we love her.

And for the LJ stuff.... it was really sweet and realistic. If only real life was like that, but we can dream...

Anyway, thumbs up again, looking forward to more

And we were very happy for the smutty interlude.

Lovely chapter. I like how they are all growing in their understanding of each other and maturing.

Very nice. Harry's open letter was nice & I enjoyed how easily he caved to Hermione. I'm looking forward to seeing Scrimgour & Voldie's reactions to the letter.

BTW, I especially enjoyed your smut cookie.

Awesome chapter.
And all I have to say about the interlude is "Oh My God!"
Now why don't you write more smut like it ....
Waiting for the next chapter...

So i didn't realize you had updated this story and so I just spent the last half hour or so rereading this story. I think it is very good. it was slightly slow at first but i think it works for the story. A gradual build up and then the reward. I didn't know you had so many stories up and cannot wait to read them all when I get the chance. I feel like you could make this fic NC17. I thought your smut was well written. I mean a bit an the tamer side compared (sp?) to other smut stories yet still very sweet. Hopefully you update soon. Keep up the good work ! I thought the whole "bill speaks for all of us" was very touching. It reminds me of my family though not as big. Hopefully you'll touch upon why Bill refuses to really cry or talk about the death. I think that was a very tragic but well played "killing". Hopefully no one else dies but you never know!