ahh...  I am quite the sucker for H/Hr. I really enjoyed reading thing  I would point out specifics but I can't think of any one thing in particular...
wait, there is that one part when they were in st. mungo's, when hermione fell, pulled down harry, and they got caught. I just find that so amusing!  if for no other reason than the fact that they got caught LOL (and from there, the fact that *hermione* was one of the ones getting caught).
there IS a part that I definitely did NOT like, though
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hermione's boss.
lol, that's it
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aditivatsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/06/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/06/08
That was a great ending to a fantastic story! I can wait to read more of your work! |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/06/08
It seems hermione is the one who needs advice this time round lol good chapter I enjoyed it! I cant wait to see what harry thinks of a relationship |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/06/08
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/06/08
Ohhhhh abother interesting chapter!!! It was kinda sweet, and Harry was a sweetie too. Hermione needs to be hit over the head as opposed to Harry in this fic, lol (and M&M's Peanuts are my favourite treat!)
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/06/08
What a nice opening chapter... It was very refreshing in a way, like a sip of ice cold water, on a scorching hot day! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 17/11/07
This story is friggin\' good. Oh, and also, hot.
H. O. T.
Hermione\'s point of view needs to be done more often and more like this.
PS Check some of your first/third person stuff, it gets a bit mixed up in the middle with \"her\" instead of \"my\" I think. |
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Hey, awesome fanfic! Loved it! Its was funny, romantic and totally HOT hehehehehe!
Well Done!
-Fonzie |
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this was great! we all know harry and hermione were meant to be! |
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GracielaUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/06/07
hey!
I think this story its amazing!
congrats! your stories are amazing keep going
Graciela |
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great story line! great writing! its really an all together amazing story! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 28/04/07
nice ending, good message, wonderful fic. cant wait for ur next story
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/04/07
sexy, i like it, and you didnt use the word pussy which is good,its one of the worst words to use in a fic, it completely kills the mood. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 01/02/07
hey seriously that was a great fic. i enjoyed it greatly, a part of me wanted another entry but im satisfied none the less. |
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