that was a Great story... I loved it and hope that you have found your insperation to contenue writing. I look forward to your as a Great author of my favorite fan fics. Keep it Up

PS. I'm waiting for the Heirs to Finish, that has been one of my Favorites

Magnificent work PhoenixFirebolt. Your story is a masterpiece. I am looking forward for a full story novel of yours about the 7th year. Don't give up. Nothing is what it seems in HBP and in the interview. Truth is out there. And the truth is that Harry and Hermione will end up together.

Like what everyone else said, it was pretty realistic and on the book, but I don't know. A part of me can't believe that Hermione and Harry will have a tension between them. And that really lengthly first part with all those lonnnnng paragraphs (I skimmed them over). Perhaps I'm being too harsh, I wouldn't know, but I think maybe you should break the paragraphs and maybe emit some of the stuff you don't need in the first bit.

Cheers.

I enjoyed your fic mainly because it is realistic - I mean, this could actually happen (the realizations of HHr) within canon, if JKR chose to write it. It wasn't far fetched and I thought it took HBP into consideration rather well. Nice job.

I love your story! So cute! It's great! Well I gave you a 5 so be proud! You did great!

I loved that!!! Oh there was so much felling put into it! I could fell it all! And I could see it all better then others i`ve read! U are really great at this!

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

That was great! I really hope that this is close to the reasons H/Hr acted the way they did in HBP! Awesome story!

Your story is just fabulous, it’s really well written, very believable and poignant at the same time.
This is the kind of story able to bring comfort and hope to every Harry/Hermione shipper.
I’m glad you didn’t stop writing, it would have been a waste.
I will be delighted to read your other stories.
keep it up and long live to fandom!

awwwww!!! i loved it, it was really good. it wasnt like those garden variety h/hr fanfics, i could actually picture this being put into the 7th book, before they go back to Hogwarts.

Nicely done. Hermione's explanations sounded very much in-character for her. I was glad to see that SHE was appalled by her own behavior the past year; she certainly wasn't behaving like the Hermione of books 1-5. The kiss at the end was very sweet.

Bravo. Wow. That was truly beautiful. Cannon? What's that? PEH! I say! THIS is how it was meant to be. It's really too bad that there are so many people that don't believe it (I won't mention names here and spoil this truly magnificent story.)

I'm still holding onto a smidgen of hope that something like this is how it will be in the end, and if it doesn't, well we have unbelievably wonderful stories like this one in fanon to remind of how unique and special and powerful the bond between our beloved hero and his heroine is...regardless of what "other" people say.

VERY well done, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this with us. Harry & Hermione 4evr.

One more possible explanation for the way OCC Hermione in book 6...wow....it brings some hope, dont you think? Well, even if I dont hold that much hope to happen in the books, I loved this fic. As other authors, you help to keep our beloved ship going. Thank you!

Hope to see more of your fics soon!

Really nice story and explanation of Hermione's actions in HBP. Harry's thoughts on their friendship were well done.

This is an exceptional story that stands by what I believed was going to happen as far as H/Hr but according to the main source it wasn't meant to be. H/Hr continues to sail if only in our hearts and minds! H/Hr forever!!

S.K.