AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/06/08
I loved it! I thought you did a brilliant job! This has to be the best NC17 story I have read. It was so touching and wasn't too tacky or smutty it was driven on pure emotion which I find is so much more engaging! congradulations!   |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/07
How sweet  And smutty too.  It's wonderful that Harry and Hermione got to share that with each other.  Fantastic work! |
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Oh my god. This fic made me cry so hard. It's so wonderful! The best I've seen here on portkey. You're such an amazing author, making the readers feel things that you imagined. Keep up the tremendous work!
lil_irish_girl |
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My God! I loved that so much! It was so sad! I loved it! It's so well written! That was brilliant!
-Michelle |
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romakoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/02/06
mmm delicious
love the suspense
heh who doesn't love a short one shot full of the good stuff  |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/08/05
that was so swwet, how long was Harry gone anyway? Well, i'm glad he finally came back! |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for the review. And he was gone for about 4 years. Thanks again! Glad you enjoyed it! |
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Very nicely written, You really know how to write smut!! I loved it. The lust, the passion... Geez... You're good!
Very nice peice. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for the review! Always appreciated! Glad you enjoyed it! |
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 ......I can't even speak! That was soooo wonderful! You have to be incredibly sensual and sexual to write a story like this! Dont worry, i'm straight!  I'm not gay! Fortunately. Anyway, that was really good! |
Author Feedback: lol. That review definetly made me smile. Thanks so much, and I understand. lol. Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it. |
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NatiFcs28Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/05
the ending kind of leaves it handing, ya kno? like, where has he been all this time, why did he return then and not before??
good story, but not as a one shot. the site says it's completed, so i take it that you are. just saying. if you add a chapter (and i'd suggest that you do), let me know, i'd love to read it.
but i liked it, a lot.
-Nati K A |
Author Feedback: It was meant to be mysterious like that. You're not supposed to know where he was. It's not supposed to matter because all that matters now is that they're together again. I write like that, leaving holes in my one-shots so that it gives the reader something to ponder about. Sorry if you wanted another chapter. I don't have one written and don't plan on writing one. Thanks for reviewing! I enjoy the feedback! |
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coolmanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/05
Very good. You should edit this and put it in the Felix Felices competition. The descriptions we awesome. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much, but I'm not interested in the competition very much. Thanks for the suggestion anyways. |
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My mouth is hanging wide open. That was amazing! You are a very very gifted writer. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I try. lol. Thanks for the review! I always appreciate them! |
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Oooh, I absolutely loved this!! Smut with substance is always a good thing. I just loved the flashback scene, and the way the reacted upon seeing each other again. Great job!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much for reviewing! Glad you liked it so much! |
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Well that was steamy! You gave me chills. That was a beautiful love story. Beautifully written emotions brought me into the story from beginning to end. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoy my writing so much! Thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/07/05
i really like the details. they help bring the story to life. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it! |
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Oh my, that was wonderful! You did so well in illustrating the love scene but without being overtly offensive. I like it. Please keep writing, this was absolutly incredible! Great job!
*Gaya |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I try to make my stories more romantic than smuty. Thanks for reviewing! |
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