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I'd never read "I Already Do" before, so after leaving a ridiculously long review there, I figured I'd go over here. The first chapter didn't make a lot of sense to me, with the abrupt switch from hermione to the letters, and then the letters seemed a bit too fluffy!draco, especially since he went back to being less!fluffy!draco in part 2, but I was reading for part 2, angry!ron and knowing!hermione anyway so...
But, what took the cake was when I got to:
“Merlin you’re a kinky Gryffindor,”
and I tried to remember what it had been in the H/H version, so I went and looked:
“Merlin you’re demandingly kinky,”
Ah!!!!!!!!
If only harry and draco knew that they sounded so alike in bed. You can just see each of them saying it, and if they only knew... |