I was seriously laughing at this! And your sideline commentary had me cracking up! Well done

lol As the story should be

“Well, now that we have professed our undying love for one another, we get to go shag.”

Fantastic!

This really shouldn't be a G. It should be a PG-13 at least. I mean I wouldn't read this to children for storytime.

This shouldn't be a G. It should be a PG-13 at least. Since I wouldn't read this to children for storytime.

Stu-pid. No offense, but I absolutely hate it when the characters aknowledge that J.K. Rowling exists and that people write fanfics about them.

*snorts*nice i can see that your through a little reality in.

THIS IS FANTASTIC! THIS IS ONLY THE SECOND STORY I HAVE READ BY YOU BUT YOU ARE A BLOODY BRILLIANT WRITER! CONGRATULATIONS!

AHAHA wow this is a great humor fic! The plain old truth is right out in front of them, I burst out laughing when Hermoine started talking to her tits.

lol cute! I loved it! But I wish it was just a TINY bit more serious... like more between Harry and Hermione than them saying things about "Harmonians" hehe... but oh well, I loved it nevertheless!
-Michelle

Well this was very unusual! I liked the way you wrote it, makes it funny! I was laughing for quite a while at what Harry said. Never seen a story like this. It was really great! Keep up the good work!

that was hysterical and cute all at the same time I still don't know how you do it. and don't worry I know Harry and Hermione won't disappoint us because HMS pumpkin pie will live forever
love always
melissa

i dont think that's considered G but it was very good

i dont think that's considered G but it was very good

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!! That was so fucking funny!! Im ready to roll around laughing on the floor!!!!! You are an extremely good writer. You should do some more stories like this one! Anyways, still laughing my ass off!!

lmao I loved it. The author just informed me im madly in love with you. Thatw as good I like how she talks to her chest!