oh my gosh. i love your story! I just started reading it today and its fabulous, keep up the great work I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Oh no, Cassidy... Wow, that's tough. Anyway, I'm very glad you updated. I didn't get a chance to read this when it came out a couple of days ago; I was busy over the weekend finishing up last minute things for school. Today was the last day of classes so I went here and read this right after school. Great job by the way. Love your story.

In this sentence: "As she placed her weight on her food, the rock slipped out..." "Food" is supposed to be `foot,' right?

Please update again soon (if you get the chance). I look forward to reading more. =]

Good story! Love the diary parts!

I hope that you have more on James and Sarah's parents next chapter

Update soon!

good story, only the second L/J story i have read, but you did a good job with writing it, i do know how work gets in the way, i think i went 4 months straight without working on my own writing, now i got hooked on fanfiction so there is no telling how long its going to be before i get around to writing more, good luck with the writing, and i like how you tied in the diary, though it was a bit confusing in the beginning.

ok now cassidy dies. That totally sucks but i mean i know she was a pain but come on. No one deserves to die like that. Hopefully they catch the fiens that did this. But as we all know it won't happen. I hope Remus is ok with this. I mean what a shocker to anyone in love. Gosh this must suck for Lane and everyone. Keep Writing.

My Favorite Character: Sarah

Favorite Couple: Lily and James

Favorite Chapter:The prank one- soo funny!

Favorite Scene:When the girls were drunk was pretty hilarious especially the cloud thing- not realistic but funny anyway.

Least Favorite Character: Cassidy- so mean and her mood swingsa are so strange.

Least Favorite Chapter: All been pretty good.

Least Favorite Couple:Lane and her bf- he cheated on her she should not want to get back with him!

Least Favorite Scene: Where they list all the couples that are going to get married- pretty ridiculous

Do you like the quotes I use?: Yes although it annoys me when they are in the middle of a chapter it spoils the fluidity

Any you absolutely hate?:
Nothing really- great work

Great Story! I love it! It's so cool how you can plan these things ahead of time. It's almost like how JKR gives you these little things, like she skates over this thing that's super important, and makes it sound like nothing, and she gets back to it in one of the other books and explains it more fully. It sorta gives the story more of a well planned look. Update soon!

Cheerio!
Pottersgurl4evr

i really like this story it is one of the best i have read ever on any fanfic site i love it please please update soon!!

I loved that little connection to the diary that you made. So which Chicago? like the actual city or like the movie.... I feel a little stupid for asking the question but I've never been to Chicago, but I just recently saw the movie.... lol.... but I can't wait to be able to read the next chapter!

*%* Susanna *%*

I'll help you out if you need any. I know -some- stuff about Chicago, not a whole lot (just certain things from watching ER and other...er, stuff). Depends what you want to know. Oh, I wanted to see In the Land of Women. I'm glad you enjoyed it, sounds like a great movie then. And yeah, One Tree Hill, can't wait for that.

To the story and this chapter. I had a feeling that Gabriella in the diary was James' mother (I think we all did). Had an inkling that perhaps Brianna was Sarah's mom. That's cool. Awesome job writing these last couple chapters. Keep up the good work.

I'm still here. But I'm pretty busy too. So much schoolwork, never any time for fanfiction. That's why it's taken me so long to come here to read this chapter even though this was posted a while ago.

Poor Cassidy, she doesn't get to see Remus. I hope she'll be okay, Sarah as well. Well, I'm going to read the next chapter now.

I think its great that Lily found something of Sara's mom and James' mom. I mean who knows maybe she can give her the diary for x-mas. I mean it only seems right and that way Sarah knows a little about her mom and dad when they were here. I think Lily should meet James' parents it would be good for both of them and everything. Keep Writing.

Hey I really like this story a lot. OMG! I love OTH to. It hasn't been on for a really long time and I was starting to wonder if it was cancelled or something. I don't know how much help I would be but I just got back from a trip to Chicago last weekend. I had a lot of fun. I don't know if I could help but if you want to talk, let me know. Also do you know when OTH will be back on, just so I don't miss it. Can't wait for the next update!

I love this story! I hope you update soon and I cannot wait to see what you do with the diary and jewelry box!

ok so now i'm upt to date again with the story. I hope Lily and Sara get back to their friendship. And Cassie is getting on my nerves as well. I mean she doesn't have to be a pain to everyone just because her and remus is not doing so well. I think Sirus might find out about Pete's true intentions on his going away missions. Keep Writing.