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When I Told Her

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Hani

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

That is how it's suppose to be. HMS Harmony will sail on forever in my heart.

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inyia

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

Perfect. What else can I say? I love it. Thank you for that piece of heaven ^_^

Kisses

Author Feedback: Thanks for reading!

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the real HOPE

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

how sweet, Harry has twins with Hermy as he looks back on his life

Author Feedback: Teehee. thanks.

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MagicalKira

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

AWWWWWWW! That was without doubt the sweetest entry I've read thus far, and I've read a few.

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thanks...

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

This is a cute story. You do have some problems with verb tense, however. Most of the story is written in past, but you randomly switched to present a few times. I thought you should know.

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Lady Starlight

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

I loved the little epilogue at the end... hehehe

Very cute and sweet. Nice piece.

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hammergal

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

Aww, that was so sweet. Just what we need at this time. H/Hr love is perfect, your fic was a nice one.

Author Feedback: i know. i was devastated upon reading HBP and the ship that i'm rooting for did not appear. so i wrote a version of how i want it to be. heehee. hope you enjoyed reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it. cheers!

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Amber Eyz

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

AWWWWWW!!

That was sooo...SWEET!!!

That was absolutely, postively, 100% BEAUTIFUL!!

I LOVE the way they told their feelings! God, someone needs to do a scene like that in the longer, post-HBP fanfics. Just...beautiful!!

Author Feedback: heehee. thanks. i'm working on a new story. you might hate me at the beginning of it but please try to read it. it's still HHr. i'll take that ship down to my grave.

thanks again! cheers!

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Anonymous

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05

ok fine- it was great ok very nice. very cool i liked how h/hr hookd ^ blabblabla leave me alone now

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