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Very good job! I'm not sure if I liked Harry being the rebound for Hermione, but oh well! A little fluff never hurt anyone! And by the way, those quotes are really cute and fit very nicely in the story. Overall, your Hermione was much better than HBP Hermione, and that's saying something!
~Stephanie |
Author Feedback: Well, I didn't really want either being the rebound, but I figured since Hermione is most in touch with her feelings, this way was safer.
I loved the quotes too. I really adore that movie and haven't been able to quote it yet.
And I'm glad you enjoyed this Hermione, I really enjoyed re-molding her!
Thanks so much for reviewing!! |
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Anne USigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/07/05
Nicely done. You managed a fair bit of humour along with some nice "flangst" and sweet, realistic ending. Harry was a bit more glib with his feelings than I usually see him, but it seemed to work well here. Hermione was wonderful, the Hermione of old (the one we Harmonians love and JKR seems to hate *sigh*).  |
Author Feedback: "Flangst." Now there's a term I've never heard. Is that fluffy angst? (I'm so out of the loop!)
Anyway, I'm happy to bring Hermione back! I missed her greatly. And I guess Harry could have come across as glib here. But I'm glad you thought it worked. 
Thanks so much for reviewing! I can't remember if I've told you before or not, but I'm a big fan of yours! |
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Apparently Rowling idea of a good relationship is constant bickering and not having the ability to trust one another. Apparently she scoffs at the idea of a healthy relationship built on trust, compassion, understanding and respect is something to scoff at. If that makes me delusional, count me in…
Sorry, had to put in my daily “What the hell was she thinking” rant.
Thank you for writing this, it made me happy. 
-Bob
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Author Feedback: Hey, I'm just as delusional as you! I personally like it in this camp! Camp Delusional!
Anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for reviewing! |
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HarryluvrSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
This was really sweet! Keep up great work and write a whole lot more fanfictions! |
Author Feedback: I definitely plan to keep writing!
Thanks for reviewing! |
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NiceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
how sweet. but if hermione had any sense she would have grabbed harry and gave him a long overdue snog to hold them over .  |
Author Feedback: I had thought about that, but I wanted to give them something to wait for. There will be tons of snogging when they get back. (even if it is in my own little world)
Thanks for reviewing! |
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HaniUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
I don't know if I'm going to cry or... My emotions are in a ramble. And I'm putting the blame on the-book-that-must-not-be-named.
Good job! |
Author Feedback: Book-that-must-not-be-named, funny!! Please don't cry! The ship sails on!!
Thanks so much for reviewing! |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
You have provided the most quotable quotes in a fic I think I've ever read. If I ever quote you, I will credit you. I can't list all the many quotable things you said separately - but this fic was chock-a-block!!! Oh, and your fic was VERY excellent, BTW...
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx |
Author Feedback: Lady Jane,
Sure, you can quote me! I guess I never thought of my fics as quotable, but I appreciate the compliment! And I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!! |
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MochieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
I loved it. Especially:
He once told Mrs. Weasley, “No, no! ‘Rare’ implies dangerously cooked. When I say rare I mean just let it look at the oven in terror, then bring it out to me.”
And that they didn't end up together, if he said no to Ginny he prolly wouldent suddenly say yes to Hermione.
Bravo... |
Author Feedback: I wish I could take credit for that line, but I can't. That's from the 10th Kingdom, but I thought it would really apply there.
And you make a good point about saying no to Ginny and saying yes to Hermione. Makes alot of sense. I'm glad I didn't go that route now.
Thanks so much for reviewing! |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
Excellent.. yes, we'll all be writing book sevens replacements in our heads, we'll all be writing book seven replacements in our heads.. to the tune of we'll be coming around the mountain.. okay... I have no idea WHERE that came from.. Excellent one shot! |
Author Feedback: Catchy little tune you've got going there! It made me laugh (and I needed that today -- thanks!)
Anyway, glad you liked it! And thanks for reviewing! |
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u r like the best writer EVER!! i said u have the writin styling of jkr but that was SS/PS-OOTP not that crap in HBP!! how could she!!! anyway love the fic!!like always |
Author Feedback: Wow, major blushing from those compliments!  And I still think that JKR is a great writer, she just sucks at romance. Besides, maybe we're worrying for nothing, still one more book to go ... *crossing fingers*
Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Thanks so much for reviewing! Great to hear from you! |
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i like your idea of the spell that hit hermione in the DOM and that it screwed around with her emotions. i never thought of that, it explains her behaviour in HBP! |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I forget who I was talking to (either my friend or my cousin) who came up with that idea with me. I'm hoping that's the reason, since we never found out what that spell was....
Thanks for reviewing! |
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happyladySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
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THIS ONE-SHOT IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT YOU KNOW ME I LOVE ANYTHING YOU WRITE. BUT HURRY UP AND GET STARTED ON "LIFETIME"
GLORIA |
Author Feedback: Hello Gloria! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I promise you that I will be working very hard on "Lifetime" today (even though I'm at work ... Shhhhhh!  )
Thanks for reviewing! I love hearing from you! |
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It was so sweet and wonderful and fluffy/angsty. This is why we love these characters... not the Hormone Bursting Parody of our characters.
R/Hr snogging... bleck.
I loved the H/Hr action in this one, the understanding, concern, attention to each other. I liked how their was emphasis on starting new lives, afterwards and giving themselves things to look forward to. |
Author Feedback: Parodies are exactly what those were! And I'm sorry for even the mention of r/Hr snogging, but I felt I had to be real on this one. It hurt to write, I'll admit.
I'm so glad you liked it. You picked up on everything I hoped the readers would!
Thanks for reviewing! Always great to hear from you! |
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Thank you for fixing book 6 for me, too! This is what I want to see, and I haven't lost hope. |
Author Feedback: I'm so glad to hear that you haven't lost hope! If we all give up, then hr/r shippers have won.
Thank you very much for reviewing! |
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Wow! Really great story! I love it! Well I can't wait for you to continue! I love the 'sweetheart' line! So cute! |
Author Feedback: Well, this story is finished, so no continuing. But, I will continue writing, never fear! I'll never give up this ship!
Thanks for reviewing!! |
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