Ahh I don't really see any Harmony moments in this, but patience is a virtue, right? Good start; please hurry with those next chapters!  |
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This is a wonderful story. One that I would like to keep up with, but it's really difficult when the chapters are so far apart from one another. I know that you seem to enjoy getting feedback and if it would help I will write one at the end of each chapter that I finish reading, or I could add you to one of the IM clients so that we could talk about the story from time to time because I know how easy it is to get discouraged from writing without any substantive feedback. Anyways I just want to tell you that I think your story is one of the best out there and that I really hope you continue to write it. Thanks! |
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i love this story,i hope harry and hermione get together soon. please,please,please update soon |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 29/06/08
I am enjoying your vision of book 6immensely and hope to read more soon. |
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muggledadSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/06/08
I really like what you've done with the travesty that is HBP. I find it interesting how you take the same chap titles & spin a different story. Minor digression on perspective. |
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AnatheraSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 25/04/08
This is probably the fourth time i have started reading this fic, i just keep restarting it, keep up the writing, i really like it. |
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rhodonUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/04/08
ooh hey a side note i forgot for this chapter
I\'m pretty sure harry and ron meet hermiones parents in an earlier book
book 2 i think.
they are seen exchanging real money for wizard money and then in the book shop when Lucius points them out |
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nurraySigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 14/04/08
Ok some interesting developments are hinted at here and revealed. It appears that Sirius knew of a Potter family trait or two. But the question then becomes why didn't Sirius just tell Harry about the trait and how to train it?
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GuyroSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 30/03/08
can you please bring out a new chapter very soon,
this story is excellant and has got such good
potential, i have been looking for a story which
takes place after 5th year for ages and i have
finally found one that seems like it will be
novel length, so please bring out a new chapter
soon, also do you reply to the reviews that are
made? if you do can you tell me when the next
chapter is coming because this story has such a
brilliant beginning |
Author Feedback: I'm looking to get the next chapter out middle of next week. (And yes, I try to reply to reviews.) |
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so... are you planning an update or again hibernation. hey, you can't just let the story hang like that. |
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so... are you planning an update or again hibernation. hey, you can't just let the story hang like that. |
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OOOOOOOOOH! I wanna know what this means! Soooooo intriguing! I'll be tracking this one for sure!
Hope everything is well.
~ Harmony_4ever88 |
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This chapter is absolutely touching! Almost cried my self.
I'll be tracking this for sure!
~ Harmony_4ever88 |
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this is a really good fic but i believe it would be better if the h-hr started happening a bit sooner rather than later because at the moment it kinda seems like one of the fics where hermione has always been in love with him and he figures it out in the last 5 minutes. otherwise awesome take on book 6 |
Author Feedback: Ah, but there's literally thousands of stories out there that *force* the characters to do something that doesn't make emotional sense in order to get it done sooner.
When I write, I pretend I'm dealing with real people. I can't just force them, either of them, to come to any kind of sudden realization like that. And for the record, no, Hermione is not pining for Harry right now, and I have the notes to prove it. |
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I'm sorry to hear about all of that, but hopefully things are getting better for you. And hey, writings always therapeutic, so there's an upside.
Anyway. I just found this story, and I really like it so far. I like the way its slowly progeressing and I love your "completely average" DADA professor.
Except, he's not completely average, is he? It's the green eyes! Just like Harry! He could see Harry, couldn't he? Will Harry get able to see through stuff too?
Looking forward to more! |
Author Feedback: Hmm.... |
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