Aww, i just finished reading the whole thing. And allow me to tell you how incredibly good you are at this I absolutely loved the plot and the way it was written

How about a sequel? I would love that very much

i wonder why harry didnt come across the journal sooner.
also, the last line about james getting killed is not believable.

i guess you should look for a beta...

overall a nice story, so far.

I actually remember those rides!!!

They were at the Del Mar Fair a couple years back.

I remember wondering the exact same thing as Harry was when he walked in the Gravitron. I almost yelped(and I don't yelp to often)when the walls slid up to gain momentum.

In the ride,there was a bar where people could hang their stuff,to my left there was an empty space and in front of it someone forgot a Bugs Bunny head water bottle.

For almost the whole ride I just stared at the bottle seemingly floating horizontally by it's strap from the bar in midair.

The Pirate Ship was fun too,I sat at the back and it was a good thing too because everyone infront of me puked.

I just realized if someone like Ron would ask why they were wearing eachother's outfit(which in turn would of course lead to their realization that they indeed are),Hermione would be speechless and Harry could tell them since they had a disagreement about it they thought they should see how the other half lives.Then Harry could make a comment about how he should wear dresses more often simply for the ample breexe on his parts(as an homage to the strangely dressed wizard at the Quidditch World Cup in the fourth book)

Uh oh,I'm writing my chapters in my reviews aren't I? Oh well,you said you wanted constructive criticism.

Hmmm...Scrabble on their honeymoon....actually I can picture it! It gives Hermione a chance to gloat about how smart she is without really gloating.

I like how they were arguing about who had it worse(guys when they wear tuxes or girls when they wear dresses)

I think it would have been funny for them to be still arguing about that before they entered the reception hall and Sirius overhearing them.

Now Sirius,being the proud Marauder he is,probably would have cast a spell a spell to transfigure their clothes so that Harry would be wearing the dress and Hermione would be wearing the tux,so they would be wearing eachother's outfits when they walked into the reception.

I suppose that would make tossing the garter belt and the boquet(That's it I'm finding my dictionary,curse my knowledge of words but horrible spelling)toss kinda awkward.

This story is awesome!! It's not everyday when you have to remind yourself to keep an extra Internet Explorer window open in case you want to see what something in the story look like!!!

The dress looks incredible!! I can totally imagine Emma Watson and Hermione each wearing a version of that dress(Hermione is illustrated of course as to not confuse the two)

The veil looks like the one Padme was wearing when she married Anakin in Star Wars Episode II:Attack of the Clones.

Wow,Harry suprised(or is it surprised,I really need to look in a dictionary more often)Hermione all right. That ring looks amazing!!!

This story was really good. I like all of your stories and one-shots.

Love this story It's an old fav of mine so have to comment on it!

I cant believe I found this story again. A couple months back I wanted to read the story with the Precious quote in it but saddly I had not bookmarked it or commented on it so I had lost it.

By luck I have found you again and this time I'm making sure I won't lose this story and chapter.

Awww! That was sooooo sweet! I loved it!
I loved the bit in chapter 9:

Harry laughed loudly. “A golf resort? And you call yourself my best friend.”
“No, I call myself Hermione.”
“Ha ha. Aren't you just the brightest crayon in the box?”
Hermione nodded. “I like to think so.”

I thought that was BRILLIANT *tries to remember the crayon comeback for future use*

I love that ride, when the momentun gets going I would always stand on the wall (provided that I didn't get in trouble)

LOL lol lol lol quite a nice story only if you had better writing skills.

duh duh duh huh huh huh huh whaaa??? what???? call da whambulaaaaance please!!!!!!!!

oh sheesh lily's diary is err weird not the thigns in it but the last entry was a little unbelievable.